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Tangled tangibles
A gossamer web
A spider spun
Catches dew
At a cool new dawn
A single brown leaf
Fall to the ground
Waiting with its fellows
To follow suit
A flower petal
Fall from the bloom
Graceful in descent
To the waiting earth
Lauded by the songs
Of happy crickets
A yellow butterfly
Flutters giddily by
On an errand
that only it knew
Watched by admiring
Chirpy birds’ eye
The tangibles
in the ethereal
with silent communal grace
mates with
the intangibles.
A spider spun
Catches dew
At a cool new dawn
A single brown leaf
Fall to the ground
Waiting with its fellows
To follow suit
A flower petal
Fall from the bloom
Graceful in descent
To the waiting earth
Lauded by the songs
Of happy crickets
A yellow butterfly
Flutters giddily by
On an errand
that only it knew
Watched by admiring
Chirpy birds’ eye
The tangibles
in the ethereal
with silent communal grace
mates with
the intangibles.
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27th Feb 2012 10:17pm
Once again, so lovely
27th Feb 2012 11:01pm
re: Once again, so lovely
28th Feb 2012 3:20am
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28th Feb 2012 3:21am
:)
28th Feb 2012 4:01am
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28th Feb 2012 8:32am
The freshness of your poetry
28th Feb 2012 12:25pm
I've read it all in one breath.
I was filled with fresh oxygen.
You're really very good.
I love your poems
I was filled with fresh oxygen.
You're really very good.
I love your poems
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re: The freshness of your poetry
28th Feb 2012 12:57pm
wtf....
28th Feb 2012 7:27pm
i thought i commented on this last night when i read it....lol....but this is Beautiful....i Love the imagery....great job ms grace....;)
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re: wtf....
28th Feb 2012 7:29pm