Narcissus

Thought provoking and cool.  Nicely done.

Yes, the mirrored pool of water has fooled many of us. Hugs and peace, O)

Righteous

This is clever on so many levels.

another poem
to make your audience think
a little more - smiles

intellectual and deep. However I feel that the phrase ugly, “face lurks ruins the poem.” Other than that the poem is brilliant.

One hand clapping, glasshoppah.