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echoes of devotion
I am comfortable with my desire for you
with my need to be desired
by you
the secret intimacy of your shadow hands slipping the nightgown up over my breasts
smoothing your palms over the shameless demanding curves
the complex striations of fantasy
shifting the spine in helical arches
I close my eyes and moan into the space where we exist together
I am touched
I am touching…
the night inhales echoes of devotion
exhales my kiss on your lips
with my need to be desired
by you
the secret intimacy of your shadow hands slipping the nightgown up over my breasts
smoothing your palms over the shameless demanding curves
the complex striations of fantasy
shifting the spine in helical arches
I close my eyes and moan into the space where we exist together
I am touched
I am touching…
the night inhales echoes of devotion
exhales my kiss on your lips
Published 4th Sep 2021
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4th Sep 2021 11:09am
This is a beautiful piece. I could relate to it…it’s possible that all of us have a need to be desired “by you:”
The description of the nightgown was particularly beautiful.
The description of the nightgown was particularly beautiful.
4th Sep 2021 12:03pm
4th Sep 2021 2:54pm
Just. so. gorgeously written....
Your poetic voice captures my imagination and always draws me in. You're a rarity here and I feel lucky to partake in reading and experiencing your profound creativity..... Thanks for that.
🌹 - 💙
B
Your poetic voice captures my imagination and always draws me in. You're a rarity here and I feel lucky to partake in reading and experiencing your profound creativity..... Thanks for that.
🌹 - 💙
B
4th Sep 2021 3:47pm
4th Sep 2021 7:07pm
Thanks for allowing me to experience an UP on this beautiful journey. Hugs and peace, O)
19th Sep 2021 2:30pm
