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The Old Self and Sin
I've awoken to the fact
that one shouldn't look back
at the past as often as I do.
Biblical type regrets
the heart and soul cannot digest
all the salt that is left,
memories of you.
that one shouldn't look back
at the past as often as I do.
Biblical type regrets
the heart and soul cannot digest
all the salt that is left,
memories of you.
Published 3rd Sep 2021
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3rd Sep 2021 3:52pm
Love the slant rhyme in this ... powerful ... distilled ... relatable ... another keeper ...
3rd Sep 2021 4:47pm
"The Old Self and Sin".
.... Reminds me of an ancestor of mine, who referred to himself as "the old evil".
... A wonderful, concise piece that emanates with the art of brevity.
.... Reminds me of an ancestor of mine, who referred to himself as "the old evil".
... A wonderful, concise piece that emanates with the art of brevity.
3rd Sep 2021 8:19pm
4th Sep 2021 3:56am
10th Oct 2021 4:54pm
Reflecting gives us perspective, while some try to live in the past.
Incredible write.
Incredible write.
