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A Lover’s Eyes
I’m walking down the street
I see her
Beautiful and sexy
Voluptuous
She’s looking at her phone
Then a sly smile breaks out
I know that look
It’s her lover
Nothing else matters
Time stops
I walk on …
I see her
Beautiful and sexy
Voluptuous
She’s looking at her phone
Then a sly smile breaks out
I know that look
It’s her lover
Nothing else matters
Time stops
I walk on …
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2nd Sep 2021 4:31pm
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2nd Sep 2021 5:01pm
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2nd Sep 2021 5:02pm
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Re. A Lover’s Eyes
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2021 6:18pm
Hard to compete when it comes to that sly smile... nicely captured, big like! 💜💜
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2nd Sep 2021 6:40pm
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Re. A Lover’s Eyes
2nd Sep 2021 10:02pm
The magic will be on the next corner...keeping walking. Hugs and peace, O)
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2nd Sep 2021 10:12pm
Re. A Lover’s Eyes
3rd Sep 2021 2:03pm
A simple piece with a big impact on the reader. Those enticing moments in life when we observe others at a distance , and they may never be aware of their impact on us!
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3rd Sep 2021 2:06pm
This was certainly one of those moments
I've seen look so many times before
It makes my day each time ..
Thx RPM
I've seen look so many times before
It makes my day each time ..
Thx RPM
Re. A Lover’s Eyes
6th Sep 2021 9:46am
exemplary people~watchin skills, PoetS.. to see what others miss, such as "that look".. this makes u artist-extraordinare, yknw?! yep. ;)
lovely lines, sweet man♡
in everLike,
~d
lovely lines, sweet man♡
in everLike,
~d
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Re. A Lover’s Eyes
7th Oct 2021 4:40pm
Those unmistakable smiles, they are so unique and you captured it perfectly just passing by.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
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Re. A Lover’s Eyes
7th Oct 2021 4:43pm