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.. raise your glass
here i stand
in front of thee,
on a world stage
for all to see,
time for some words
beautiful and humanly,
i denounce all killing,
and weaponry,
i propose a
brand new loveosophy,
please raise your glass,
and vow with me,
to share with those,
who live less fortunately,
to save the orphans,
care for the elderly,
to cherish the planet,
the air, land and seas,
lay down your hate,
and be anger free,
hellos to a stranger,
will concrete our decree,
let’s start a real effort
for the whole world to be..
a planet of love and peace,
in total harmony.
in front of thee,
on a world stage
for all to see,
time for some words
beautiful and humanly,
i denounce all killing,
and weaponry,
i propose a
brand new loveosophy,
please raise your glass,
and vow with me,
to share with those,
who live less fortunately,
to save the orphans,
care for the elderly,
to cherish the planet,
the air, land and seas,
lay down your hate,
and be anger free,
hellos to a stranger,
will concrete our decree,
let’s start a real effort
for the whole world to be..
a planet of love and peace,
in total harmony.
Written by
OG-Poetry
Published 28th Aug 2021
| Edited 1st Mar 2023
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Re. .. raise your glass
28th Aug 2021 8:22pm
Re: Re. .. raise your glass
28th Aug 2021 9:24pm
thank you very much Ahavati for your very important feedback and encouragement!
:-)
OG LOVE AND RESPECT
:-)
OG LOVE AND RESPECT
Re. .. raise your glass
28th Aug 2021 8:50pm
What a dream world would it be if we all can live together with peace and happiness and harmony in a world made up of sense and respect for all humanity with the sea the land the skies and nature 👊👍
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Re: Re. .. raise your glass
28th Aug 2021 9:20pm
.. more like a fantasy at this point..
never lose hope
thank you Stoneman for your special
and always on point insightful feedback.
it’s all about the love
you already know!
OG WARRIOR RESPECT
never lose hope
thank you Stoneman for your special
and always on point insightful feedback.
it’s all about the love
you already know!
OG WARRIOR RESPECT
Re: Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 7:41pm
Re. .. raise your glass
28th Aug 2021 9:56pm
The world seems to have taken a wrong turn since the millennium. We've been through terrorism, financial crisis, a global pandemic and now the looming threat of climate change.
Enjoyed the rhyme in this poem and the message to love.
Enjoyed the rhyme in this poem and the message to love.
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Re: Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 1:03pm
thanks (Evocative) for taking the time to post you’re well received commentary
.. it is a mad world, we are listing..
but we (whom believe in humanity) still have the time to right the ship
.. we’re going to need help though
OG Respect
.. it is a mad world, we are listing..
but we (whom believe in humanity) still have the time to right the ship
.. we’re going to need help though
OG Respect
Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 00:02am
Yes, we need more love and less hate in the world !
Sadly, those who peddle hatred fail to see the ugliness in their own behaviour(s) when externalising their low lying vibrations.
Cheers to being love & light…🥂
Sadly, those who peddle hatred fail to see the ugliness in their own behaviour(s) when externalising their low lying vibrations.
Cheers to being love & light…🥂
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Re: Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 1:14pm
..”those who peddle hatred fail to see the ugliness in their own behaviour”
very well stated
Smoke
thank you (shadow_starzzz) for taking the time to post your very important feedback
OG Respect and Love
very well stated
Smoke
thank you (shadow_starzzz) for taking the time to post your very important feedback
OG Respect and Love
Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 00:23am
Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 1:19pm
.. thank you (Elenore) for taking the time out to read the piece,
and most importantly.. posting your feedback.
very encouraging.
OG Respect
and most importantly.. posting your feedback.
very encouraging.
OG Respect
Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 2:54pm
To have rhymes on the same sound repeated throughout is an amazing accomplishment, well done. And lovesophy is an awesome word.
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Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 3:08pm
thank you (AltairEndian) for stopping by and taking the time to read the piece, and most importantly posting your well received and encouraging feedback,
in my opinion a poet’s best tool is feedback :-)
OG RESPECT
in my opinion a poet’s best tool is feedback :-)
OG RESPECT
Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 5:38pm
Re. .. raise your glass
29th Aug 2021 10:09pm
absolutely (alysha) my poetic sister!
thank you for posting your passionate and encouraging feedback.
very appreciated
OG Respect
thank you for posting your passionate and encouraging feedback.
very appreciated
OG Respect
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Re: Re. .. raise your glass
thank you (CaraPecosa) for taking the time to stop by and read the piece.
.. but most importantly posting your encouraging and well received feedback!
OG RESPECT
.. but most importantly posting your encouraging and well received feedback!
OG RESPECT
Re. .. raise your glass
6th Sep 2021 11:55pm
I love that, loveosophy. The world needs peace and harmony in a way that is not unattainable. It only takes wide shoulders to lean on and big ears to listen.
Very beautiful prose.
Very beautiful prose.
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Re: Re. .. raise your glass
8th Sep 2021 2:28pm
… “It only takes wide shoulders to lean on and big ears to listen”
.. absolutely a part of the solution.
thank you my poetic sister for the encouraging feedback
i truly appreciate it.
OG RESPECT
.. absolutely a part of the solution.
thank you my poetic sister for the encouraging feedback
i truly appreciate it.
OG RESPECT
Re. .. raise your glass
8th Sep 2021 8:57pm
OG for president! If only our politicians would embrace this philosophy/ loveosophy, the world would be a better place!
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Re: Re. .. raise your glass
8th Sep 2021 9:30pm
what beautiful thing to say!
🌎 .. yes it would be a wonderful place for all
but.. at least we are doing are part :-)
thank you (Ellie) for posting your well received an inspiring feedback
i appreciate you
OG RESPECT
🌎 .. yes it would be a wonderful place for all
but.. at least we are doing are part :-)
thank you (Ellie) for posting your well received an inspiring feedback
i appreciate you
OG RESPECT
Re: Re. .. raise your glass
8th Sep 2021 9:35pm
You're welcome. I always tell the truth! I enjoy reading and reading on here and will give my honest opinion, but if I don't have anything good to say at all, I click on by!
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