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Writing Down The Words
Writing down the words
Somehow seems to make it real
The feel of your body
Close to mine
Your loving hands
Freely moving downward
Towards my thighs
Your eager lips
Kissing me again and again
Oh how our desire
Grows and grows
Until we must meet again
Your body on top of mine
Your breath blowing
On my cheek
Let us partake of each other
The way we once did
Even though I'm only
Writing down the words
Somehow seems to make it real
The feel of your body
Close to mine
Your loving hands
Freely moving downward
Towards my thighs
Your eager lips
Kissing me again and again
Oh how our desire
Grows and grows
Until we must meet again
Your body on top of mine
Your breath blowing
On my cheek
Let us partake of each other
The way we once did
Even though I'm only
Writing down the words
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Re. Writing Down The Words
26th Aug 2021 12:34pm
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26th Aug 2021 12:37pm
Thank you very much. I have been away but am glad I'm back. It's so good to hear from you. I hope all is well with you.
Re: Re. Writing Down The Words
26th Aug 2021 1:22pm
I am Dealing with the chemotherapy treatment now with a port in my chest it has been a long time since I had radiation therapy for prostate cancer and it is in remission had a tumor on the left side of my brain treated with steroids just taking it one day at a time I'm still here keeping up my faith and strength and hope that I will survive this journey and travel and walk 👊👍🌍💖 I appreciate your support and encouragement and respect for me 💖😘
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Re: Re. Writing Down The Words
27th Aug 2021 12:08pm
I'm sorry you are having to go through chemotherapy. I will include you in my prayers. I know everything will be fine if you trust God. He is, after all, responsible for our beings. Keep the faith, my dear friend!
Re: Re. Writing Down The Words
27th Aug 2021 12:11pm
Always my dear friend can't lose faith nowadays cause that is all we have to experience and believe within 👊👍🦋🤗
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Re. Writing Down The Words
26th Aug 2021 12:43pm
So glad you're back with such sensual, alluring, and beautiful words. Hugs and peace, O
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Re: Re. Writing Down The Words
26th Aug 2021 12:49pm
Thank you. That means a lot to me to hear you say it. You easily made my morning!
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26th Aug 2021 12:58pm
Re. Writing Down The Words
Dear FM,
This piece reminds me of a time when steamy and sensual and loving were rolled into one person and it was heaven on earth.
“ Let us partake of each other
The way we once did
Even though I'm only
Writing down the words” and this is how I will always remember him. Wonderful write. H🌷
This piece reminds me of a time when steamy and sensual and loving were rolled into one person and it was heaven on earth.
“ Let us partake of each other
The way we once did
Even though I'm only
Writing down the words” and this is how I will always remember him. Wonderful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Writing Down The Words
27th Aug 2021 12:10pm
Thank you for your friendship and your support of me in my writing endeavors. Both mean so much to me. Have a blessed day!
Re. Writing Down The Words
26th Aug 2021 7:22pm
A yearnsome piece. These last lines, with their hint of sexual reconnection, grip most:
Let us partake of each other
The way we once did
Even though I'm only
Writing down the words
Let us partake of each other
The way we once did
Even though I'm only
Writing down the words
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27th Aug 2021 12:13pm
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks on my poem! They really mean a lot to me.
Re. Writing Down The Words
6th Sep 2021 11:30am
Beautiful reflection of the concrete quality of words. I loved the redirection at the end!
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Re: Re. Writing Down The Words
6th Sep 2021 1:21pm
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I really appreciate it! Have a blessed day!