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Just Me
Dodged a bullet this time
Wrecked a rhyme
I'm doing time
But it's just in my mind
Thought I might find
A man who was kind
But once again
I was so blind
Looks like I'm better off
All by myself
I'm being me
So just get lost
Wrecked a rhyme
I'm doing time
But it's just in my mind
Thought I might find
A man who was kind
But once again
I was so blind
Looks like I'm better off
All by myself
I'm being me
So just get lost
Published 24th Aug 2021
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24th Aug 2021 10:47pm
24th Aug 2021 10:51pm
Thank you, my friend. I'm a little rusty since I haven't been writing lately. It's always great to hear from you though.
25th Aug 2021 00:40am
Sometimes people look past each other and this serves as a reminder to be present and attentive in the moment.
25th Aug 2021 10:25am
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I appreciate it.
25th Aug 2021 9:33am
Dear FM,
Ditto LDF. I’m sorry about the relationship. I’m glad you’ve regained yourself and can appreciate the strength of you!
Great write. H🌷
Ditto LDF. I’m sorry about the relationship. I’m glad you’ve regained yourself and can appreciate the strength of you!
Great write. H🌷
6th Sep 2021 8:09am
Dear H,
How missed your comments on my poem, I'm just not sure. But I do so appreciate them. I always do. Hope all is well with you! Have a blessed day!
How missed your comments on my poem, I'm just not sure. But I do so appreciate them. I always do. Hope all is well with you! Have a blessed day!
25th Aug 2021 3:13pm
So glad to see your poems back up. This one was very thought-provoking. Have a great WRITE day, hugs and kisses, O
25th Aug 2021 3:35pm
25th Aug 2021 5:27pm
Hey Faith…….sometimes we’re a better soul without a relationship…….luv this…..welcome back my friend……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Aug 2021 8:19pm
Aw, you are so right about the relationship thing. It was so good to hear from you. Thank you for your wonderful welcoming back! I missed you and others I grew close to. Have a great night, dear lady!
26th Dec 2021 11:31am
Love the independent attitude that oozes from this poem. Something to be learned from every relationship, but the strong walk away when it's time.
