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Zero ZZZZZZ's
Fog enshrouds passion
insomnia shackles verse
what price blessed sleep?
insomnia shackles verse
what price blessed sleep?
Published 24th Aug 2021
Author's Note
To quote dear Prince Hamlet, "I have of late—but wherefore
I know not—lost all my mirth, forgone all custom of exercises; and indeed it goes so heavily with my disposition"
I'm working a new job and the 3AM to 11AM shift is wreaking havoc with my versicular nature, hence my absence from this fair land.
I know not—lost all my mirth, forgone all custom of exercises; and indeed it goes so heavily with my disposition"
I'm working a new job and the 3AM to 11AM shift is wreaking havoc with my versicular nature, hence my absence from this fair land.
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24th Aug 2021 10:51pm
26th Aug 2021 6:31am
Yes, to poet would be nice🥴 Thank you so much, Soledad, for the read and comment🌹❣
25th Aug 2021 00:18am
26th Aug 2021 6:34am
Thank you, so much, Faith. I am really pleased that you enjoy the piece!
26th Aug 2021 8:16am
25th Aug 2021 3:03am
7th Sep 2021 4:59pm
Oh I always got rhythm ha ha 😍 I am growing accusrtom to the hours and starting to enjoy more and more the job. I appreciate, as always, your support dear, goddess K🌹
25th Aug 2021 10:16am
Dear GW,
While your constant presence is missed, your poetry is sharp and excellent as per! Love the Shakespearean style of this poem. And you’re spot on insomnia does hold us in shackles and I’d pay dearly for a restful nights sleep.
Awesome write. H🌷
While your constant presence is missed, your poetry is sharp and excellent as per! Love the Shakespearean style of this poem. And you’re spot on insomnia does hold us in shackles and I’d pay dearly for a restful nights sleep.
Awesome write. H🌷
7th Sep 2021 5:03pm
Dear, Honoria (something Shakespearean about your name)
I appreciate your beautiful comment and lament that we are kindred insomniacs. May the REM's be with you 😊
I appreciate your beautiful comment and lament that we are kindred insomniacs. May the REM's be with you 😊
25th Aug 2021 11:23am
7th Sep 2021 5:04pm
Thank syou, Cipher
It's beyond cool that you read my little poem. I am glad you like it.
It's beyond cool that you read my little poem. I am glad you like it.
Dearest BB...
I miss you minute by minute but I do understand your challenges of making that crazy schedule work .... I hope you're on the path in reconciling it in some way, soon... I think it's just time, and getting used to it!
You're mastery at this senryú and that last ahhhhhmazing line... Wowsers! ... You sent me to poetic school, on that gem....I am now reminded of how much I still have to learn.... Just gorgeous, my lovely poet!
Ty so much for sharing and I hope you get caught up in your sleep, soon!
Much love and endless 'I miss you's'...
🌹 -💙 - 🐻 - 💋 🐰
xo
BB
I miss you minute by minute but I do understand your challenges of making that crazy schedule work .... I hope you're on the path in reconciling it in some way, soon... I think it's just time, and getting used to it!
You're mastery at this senryú and that last ahhhhhmazing line... Wowsers! ... You sent me to poetic school, on that gem....I am now reminded of how much I still have to learn.... Just gorgeous, my lovely poet!
Ty so much for sharing and I hope you get caught up in your sleep, soon!
Much love and endless 'I miss you's'...
🌹 -💙 - 🐻 - 💋 🐰
xo
BB
7th Sep 2021 5:13pm
Dearest, Lady Blue
I miss you very much and poco a poco I'm getting used to my schedule. I am actually starting to get seriously jazzed about my new adventure. I work with some awesome folks.
I am truly appreciative of and humbled by your comment regarding this piece. The last linae is my sincerest plea.
Thank you for sharing your stellar poetic talent...you teach me with every poem you write.
Much love to you, my Goddess BB.🐻💖🐰
I miss you very much and poco a poco I'm getting used to my schedule. I am actually starting to get seriously jazzed about my new adventure. I work with some awesome folks.
I am truly appreciative of and humbled by your comment regarding this piece. The last linae is my sincerest plea.
Thank you for sharing your stellar poetic talent...you teach me with every poem you write.
Much love to you, my Goddess BB.🐻💖🐰
25th Aug 2021 10:41pm
Thabnk you so much, LJ🌹
Melatonin and I are now intimately acquainted 😁
Melatonin and I are now intimately acquainted 😁
31st Aug 2021 7:00am
7th Sep 2021 5:17pm
7th Sep 2021 2:37pm
You always have such a beautiful way with words, long or short so much is said. 'Fog enshrouds passion' is my favorite line. I hope you find the beautiful peacefulness of a good sleep, again and again...
7th Sep 2021 5:23pm
Dearest, Kristina
Thank you so much dfoer your beautiful comment I just keep beautiful things close to me that informs my way with word as and I am totally flattered that you think going in the right way.
I am discovering my healthy sleep pattern and I am pretty psyched about the job.
You're a marvelous friend, thank you, Goddess BD🌹
Thank you so much dfoer your beautiful comment I just keep beautiful things close to me that informs my way with word as and I am totally flattered that you think going in the right way.
I am discovering my healthy sleep pattern and I am pretty psyched about the job.
You're a marvelous friend, thank you, Goddess BD🌹
