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gentle
in the twilight I come to you
barren of soul
you breathe life into me
little sighs escape me like prayers
whispering to the Gods
what it is to love you
secreting away the beauty
holding tightly to the hope
my veiled thoughts are open to your heart
dawning epiphany in the sacredness of being
the purity of touch a new religion I can believe in
a gentle spirit reaches my core in tiny bursts
lighting my soul's pathways
finding myself in the solemn sanctuary of understanding
in your eyes lovely
my heart blossoms in the knowledge I'm not alone
a synchronicity of honesty
the truth of a man
found on a darkened horizon
Published 24th Aug 2021
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24th Aug 2021 7:30pm
crimsin,
Love the gentle flow of this as it pools around a darkening beginning. Great write.
down2dirt
Love the gentle flow of this as it pools around a darkening beginning. Great write.
down2dirt
26th Aug 2021 7:35pm
hi there Down2 thank you so much for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment💕
24th Aug 2021 9:06pm
26th Aug 2021 7:36pm
26th Aug 2021 8:27pm
I love when love can be seen and felt through the process of creating an environment of loveliness and beauty💖👊🦋😉
25th Aug 2021 4:05am
26th Aug 2021 7:37pm
aw thank you dearest poet my apologies on my late response... I deeply appreciate your thoughts❤
25th Aug 2021 9:44am
You have constructed a temple of letters, letters that become words... Like sentient mists that reach forth to the surface of the material realm, to gain knowledge & awareness of self. From here, the words, or building blocks of the temple, become increasingly material, reaching a crescendo, from whence they delve back into the spiritual, presenting a form that is both: transparent and concealed.
Capable of both protecting & projecting... The inhabitant of the temple, who worships is strength & beauty.
My heart vibrates in the shadow of the temple.
AMAZING.
Capable of both protecting & projecting... The inhabitant of the temple, who worships is strength & beauty.
My heart vibrates in the shadow of the temple.
AMAZING.
26th Aug 2021 7:40pm
thank you graciously dearest Cipher for such a beautiful and thoughtful comment your comment is poetry...I love it so lovely please pardon my late response💕 sometimes I can't keep up here or form my thoughts properly it's not for lack of caring just know that...
25th Aug 2021 12:06pm
You are pure poetry, beautiful lady.
This is a gorgeous read, from beginning to end.
How inspiring, you are! I feel lucky to have been able to catch this one.... *sigh*
It's a lesson in masterful creation.
Thank you so much for sharing, Brenda
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B
This is a gorgeous read, from beginning to end.
How inspiring, you are! I feel lucky to have been able to catch this one.... *sigh*
It's a lesson in masterful creation.
Thank you so much for sharing, Brenda
🌹 - 💙
B
26th Aug 2021 7:41pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue thank you lovely lady for such a very beautiful comment on my poetry... I'm blushing... please forgive my later response I'm behind here💕
4th Oct 2021 00:17am
You really do tend to write excellent verses that familiar to the reader, as if the words, left open to interpretation, are a reflection of someone's past or future about to be manifested.
Great work
Great work
4th Oct 2021 1:28am
thank you graciously dearest Wally that's all I can hope to do is connect with you guys...sending pulses of light into our collective art we will all take something different...I deeply cherish your thoughts❤
