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The beauty of boldness
First—
distinct sounds
arouse
curiosity peeks
from under
hooded eyes
Senses flicker
signaling a body's
autonomic response
of
dire potent need
Warming anticipation
leads to lack
of impulse control
and a willingness
to completely succumb
Feelings multiply
O' the sweet intensity
divine depths
of boldness
how it makes me feel
exceptional
unsurpassed
, as dark colors swirl
past my lips
over my tongue
and I consume
all of you.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 20th Aug 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2021
My longest, deepest desire.... ☕
My longest, deepest desire.... ☕
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 3:29pm
Bravo, my Princess, a saluted cup back to you. Great write. Have a positive write day.Hugs and peace, xoxo, O
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 3:31pm
I am glad you enjoyed a shared steamy cup of coffee, my dear Oral!
Ty for your thoughtful and kind words... I am so appreciative - 💙
☕ - 🌹
xo
B
Ty for your thoughtful and kind words... I am so appreciative - 💙
☕ - 🌹
xo
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 3:32pm
Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 3:56pm
You know just how much I love a good cup!!!
Yummy 😋
Thanks so much for reading and for the generous list add, Ron. I am so grateful for your kindness and lovely support - cheers! ☕
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
B
Yummy 😋
Thanks so much for reading and for the generous list add, Ron. I am so grateful for your kindness and lovely support - cheers! ☕
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 4:32pm
I like to savour it, but I suppose you can always get more...
coffee.
Insinuatingly pleasant read.
coffee.
Insinuatingly pleasant read.
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 4:43pm
Savoring definitely enhances the whole experience....In my opinion.
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.... I do so love the insinuations...
Glad you found the pleasure ✨ ☕
🌹 - B
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.... I do so love the insinuations...
Glad you found the pleasure ✨ ☕
🌹 - B
Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 4:32pm
Makes me wish i could be coffee
strong bold and alluring
that touches your core
bringing much admiration
intense feelings of awareness
strong bold and alluring
that touches your core
bringing much admiration
intense feelings of awareness
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 4:46pm
You're as warm and inviting as coffee... at times, my lovely friend!! I always look forward to reading your words as I bask in the sheer enjoyment of my morning coffee.... It's a wonderful combination!
📖-☕ - 💙
xoxoxoxo
-B
📖-☕ - 💙
xoxoxoxo
-B
Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 5:17pm
O...M...G...
This burst of sensuality infused ever so wonderfully in my mind's eye & imagination.
Awesome, amazing... Sexy cool. :)))
Beautiful.
This burst of sensuality infused ever so wonderfully in my mind's eye & imagination.
Awesome, amazing... Sexy cool. :)))
Beautiful.
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
21st Aug 2021 9:02am
I cannot love these comments more!!
Thank you so much for instilling me with pride and motivation that I can continue to create poems with some semblance of appeal....
All my warmest appreciation, Cipher
🌹 - 🌭 - 💙
xoxo
B
Thank you so much for instilling me with pride and motivation that I can continue to create poems with some semblance of appeal....
All my warmest appreciation, Cipher
🌹 - 🌭 - 💙
xoxo
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 7:04pm
You need a "BIG" cup of Juan Valadez coffee. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
21st Aug 2021 9:02am
Re. The beauty of boldness
20th Aug 2021 11:51pm
Lucky cup of Joe! :D
A steaming piece of whimsy you have going on here. Sweet write! 🌼
A steaming piece of whimsy you have going on here. Sweet write! 🌼
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
21st Aug 2021 9:04am
Lol....
Hey there AJ :)
I am so happy you enjoyed my little poem and found the innuendo of my forever and undying desire /love of coffee, appealing!!
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, my dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Hey there AJ :)
I am so happy you enjoyed my little poem and found the innuendo of my forever and undying desire /love of coffee, appealing!!
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, my dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
21st Aug 2021 4:01am
You write ideas and desires very well. It is an amazing talent Blu. "curiousity peeks", I love it.
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
21st Aug 2021 4:14am
Hey there lovely lady!!
My smile is huge, seeing you and having your presence back upon my page. I missed your poetic voice and hope to see and read more in the days ahead.... - 🕊
Thank you so much for reading and for leaving me your extremely kind comments. I am so glad you enjoyed it!!
It's always a pleasure, Lj!
🌹 - 💙
B
My smile is huge, seeing you and having your presence back upon my page. I missed your poetic voice and hope to see and read more in the days ahead.... - 🕊
Thank you so much for reading and for leaving me your extremely kind comments. I am so glad you enjoyed it!!
It's always a pleasure, Lj!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
Anonymous
21st Aug 2021 8:30pm
Wowzers Blue…….this is hot……you really grab your readers imagination…….then give it a spin…….luv how you built it up to the end so smoothly…….outstanding ink…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
25th Aug 2021 11:18am
Awww.... my lovely purple poetess... Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.... and I am overjoyed that you enjoyed yourself somewhere within my spill, here...
All my warmest appreciation and deepest gratitude - 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙 💜
B
All my warmest appreciation and deepest gratitude - 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙 💜
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
21st Aug 2021 10:22pm
The distinct flow of literal sensuality that takes subsuming into consuming. More than enchantment a bold statement that becomes the origin of all that is. A truth born into this world when the stars turn into fusion that peaks like that moment when O apexes.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
25th Aug 2021 11:20am
Hey there John!
Thank you for reading and for your extremely thoughtful and poignant sentiments, here. I couldn't be more grateful and I am so happy you found some delight or joy within...
All my warmest regards ✨
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
Thank you for reading and for your extremely thoughtful and poignant sentiments, here. I couldn't be more grateful and I am so happy you found some delight or joy within...
All my warmest regards ✨
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
Re. The beauty of boldness
23rd Aug 2021 1:48am
Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
25th Aug 2021 11:22am
Thanks so much, Harry....
Just my love of coffee ☕ taking on it's own version of desire.... hahaha....
A lovely visit and some lovely comments, received!
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
B
Just my love of coffee ☕ taking on it's own version of desire.... hahaha....
A lovely visit and some lovely comments, received!
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
2nd Oct 2021 9:45pm
Nothing like a cup of joe to start the day.
Wow, that was intense and stunning. If ads were written like this everyone would be hopped up on caffeine.
Wonderful work Blue.
Wow, that was intense and stunning. If ads were written like this everyone would be hopped up on caffeine.
Wonderful work Blue.
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
2nd Oct 2021 9:56pm
haha 😂...
Yeah, just a nice, steaming stiff cup of hot coffee!
🔥 ☕ 🔥
😆😅🤣🙃😉
Thanks, Walter!
I appreciate your awesome comments!
-B
Yeah, just a nice, steaming stiff cup of hot coffee!
🔥 ☕ 🔥
😆😅🤣🙃😉
Thanks, Walter!
I appreciate your awesome comments!
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Oct 2021 11:45pm
8th Oct 2021 7:58pm
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
8th Oct 2021 8:05pm
Yes, exactly!! .... It's the double entendre that adds a sense of sensuality and metaphoric impact... I hope!?!?.. I thank you so so much for taking a glimpse back. I love coffee poems (I write then often) and I especially love adding a little bit of 'vava-voom' into the write to accentuate my desire.... and how it flows!! haha...
.....
I'm so glad you enjoyed and found some pleasure, reading.
Much love and joy,
🌹 - 💙
B
.....
I'm so glad you enjoyed and found some pleasure, reading.
Much love and joy,
🌹 - 💙
B
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Feb 2022 2:45pm
23rd Nov 2021 00:59am
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
23rd Nov 2021 1:40am
Awww.... That's such an amazingly awesome compliment, Selina. I have such an affinity and love of coffee that it's oh so hard, to NOT eroticize it.... *wink.
Thank you for reaching back to sample a sip.
Much appreciated, sultry lady!
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you for reaching back to sample a sip.
Much appreciated, sultry lady!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. The beauty of boldness
10th Jan 2022 11:40pm
Greed plays little part nowadays it seems in intimate discourse and pillow talk.
People are in a hurry to be temporal, surfacy, disingenuous....for a few drops of rain.
But, drinking the whole cup.....hot, warm, and then room temperature...eventually cold, maybe more creamer....set to the side while working or put in a refrigerator to enjoy chilled....every fascination.
The staggering spectrum of possibilities...and the preferences or circumstances or adaptions.....the cursed lost cup spilled, the one forgotten and much later science experiment found...
Cleaning cups...buying new ones....dropping favorites....the feel of one that has served you well...
That strangeness of a first sip...scalding hot or else bitter or sweet or full of grounds or else so absolutely perfect as to put off the meal or else end it....the reason for a meeting or else the pretext for one.
But, that last sip. The rush or lingering moment of it. That taste, the final volley. The lingering momentum or the last hurrah....
Sometimes....just holding to warm yourself as the last vestige of warmth transfers it convection of connection....there...left with a tip to the cosmic waitress who has delivered thousands of witnesses to the inner protection program....lipstick on the rim....a crumpled napkin. The march to the door of forever after....experience and a motif of leaving something finished behind...done to whatever degree....fuzzy logic...and the buzz of caffeine.
People are in a hurry to be temporal, surfacy, disingenuous....for a few drops of rain.
But, drinking the whole cup.....hot, warm, and then room temperature...eventually cold, maybe more creamer....set to the side while working or put in a refrigerator to enjoy chilled....every fascination.
The staggering spectrum of possibilities...and the preferences or circumstances or adaptions.....the cursed lost cup spilled, the one forgotten and much later science experiment found...
Cleaning cups...buying new ones....dropping favorites....the feel of one that has served you well...
That strangeness of a first sip...scalding hot or else bitter or sweet or full of grounds or else so absolutely perfect as to put off the meal or else end it....the reason for a meeting or else the pretext for one.
But, that last sip. The rush or lingering moment of it. That taste, the final volley. The lingering momentum or the last hurrah....
Sometimes....just holding to warm yourself as the last vestige of warmth transfers it convection of connection....there...left with a tip to the cosmic waitress who has delivered thousands of witnesses to the inner protection program....lipstick on the rim....a crumpled napkin. The march to the door of forever after....experience and a motif of leaving something finished behind...done to whatever degree....fuzzy logic...and the buzz of caffeine.
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Re: Re. The beauty of boldness
I have a long standing love affair with coffee (this is one of several 'odes that I've written here on DUP) that I often refer to as being my longest relationship, to date...Always strong, confident in cause and effect, warm and endearing or cheeky and fanciful.... there, like clockwork. Never failing nor disappointing. Bringing me to life with a soothing touch or slamming me into shape with pure intensity. My dark bold superhero....
I absolutely adore your headspace, RT...and I bask so fully and happily in the places they take me to, as well....
🌹 - 💙 - ☕
Cheers!
I absolutely adore your headspace, RT...and I bask so fully and happily in the places they take me to, as well....
🌹 - 💙 - ☕
Cheers!
Re. The beauty of boldness
11th Jan 2022 8:07am
dire potent need ~ sheer
desire forming ~ awakens
from that bold strong scent
quickening response
of the heart ~ true lovè affair
with fiery liquid
anticipation
breathless ~ almost heart stopping
intensity hits
an exceptional
sense ~ to consume all befre you
with nothing but love
desire forming ~ awakens
from that bold strong scent
quickening response
of the heart ~ true lovè affair
with fiery liquid
anticipation
breathless ~ almost heart stopping
intensity hits
an exceptional
sense ~ to consume all befre you
with nothing but love
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Re. The beauty of boldness
28th Sep 2022 2:41am
Sensual emotions that wrapped around me as I read leading to that exquisite ending. There is the touch of dreams such as Jung conjured in his philosophies. I felt this in my manhood like a burning sensation of need and want. You brought me there.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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