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Effervescence
Little girl makes bubbles out of the air.
Grace, holds timelessness without a care.
Branches sway in a breeze -
That comes alive in the birth of belief.
Redolent sphere of sun expands
in radiance, moment of monument, radiant -
Captured in supplication grass,
Interspersed with the breeze, dispersed.
Two eyes flitter in snap shot state -
Polarity, sunshine into sunlight,
A stream without beginning or end,
An entrance without descend or ascend.
Bubbles rising, refracting, reflecting -
Marvel, child’s eyes lines of skies,
Sphere of wonderment, woven in love -
Circle of protection, chosen in love.
And in the hammock she sleeps.
Published 18th Aug 2021
Author's Note
...Just an observation of an outsider...
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18th Aug 2021 2:38pm
An awesome poem on child enjoying the bubbles and your descriptive vocab is superb as well. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
19th Aug 2021 11:44am
Thank you Zaynab for your most keep observations/insights. I very much appreciate.
18th Aug 2021 6:58pm
Beautiful and the last line took it way over the top. A++.Hugs and peace, O
19th Aug 2021 11:45am
19th Aug 2021 2:19am
You claim zero stillness, but this poem makes all motion stop, even breathing
In that moment of wonder and amazement in the eyes of a contented child
This is So Effn Good
In that moment of wonder and amazement in the eyes of a contented child
This is So Effn Good
19th Aug 2021 11:47am
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Haha... Very cool observation. I very much like and appreciate your wonderful commentary on this piece. You have a very keen perspective...
Haha... Very cool observation. I very much like and appreciate your wonderful commentary on this piece. You have a very keen perspective...
