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Eviction Notice
Visualize my pain as it drips onto the page
As I restrain my disdain from turning into rage
It's believed sage's capable of eradicating demons
Ones residing inside my mind have the strength of He-mon's
Yeah mon, you read that right; no need for oversight
I tirelessly put up a heavyweight's fight every day and night
I write despite of what goes on inside of my head
At one moment in time, chimed thoughts that I was better off dead
Now thoughts of RED RUM run rampant metaphorically
As I creatively compose rhymes; wanting to ride on my enemies
They're unworthy to own property inside of my mind
So I'm expeditiously evicting them one at a time
As I restrain my disdain from turning into rage
It's believed sage's capable of eradicating demons
Ones residing inside my mind have the strength of He-mon's
Yeah mon, you read that right; no need for oversight
I tirelessly put up a heavyweight's fight every day and night
I write despite of what goes on inside of my head
At one moment in time, chimed thoughts that I was better off dead
Now thoughts of RED RUM run rampant metaphorically
As I creatively compose rhymes; wanting to ride on my enemies
They're unworthy to own property inside of my mind
So I'm expeditiously evicting them one at a time
Published 18th Aug 2021
| Edited 3rd Oct 2021
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18th Aug 2021 1:34am
This is very much how I feel sometimes in my mind just wanna ripe someone's off just wanna release the process of rage and disgust within my mind yeah I can relate to this piece of view 👍
18th Aug 2021 1:38am
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23rd Aug 2021 3:25pm
This is a great piece showing off your skills and also the power of writing things out. There really is a healing and cleansing process in writing it out. Tight work
2nd Oct 2021 7:27am
