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distant shores
If the sun shines no more,
let me be on your shore...
for the blindness,
in a man,
makes him lost
yet the wisdom that comes from all his pain,
gifts the help, the reasoning, so momentarily explained.
let me be on your shore...
for the blindness,
in a man,
makes him lost
yet the wisdom that comes from all his pain,
gifts the help, the reasoning, so momentarily explained.
Published 16th Aug 2021
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16th Aug 2021 4:04pm
Nicely poeted, my dear 🙏🏻
To be so lost within a moment of longing.... I was swept away....
🌹 - 💙
B
To be so lost within a moment of longing.... I was swept away....
🌹 - 💙
B
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17th Aug 2021 00:53am
Hey Mystic…….short…simple…….beautifully written…….enjoyed this…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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16th Sep 2021 3:38pm
The first 2 lines are intimately beautiful, longing for that comfort you can find in someone beloved despite anything.
Wisdom definitely does come from pain if we listen and learn. Love this multi-dimensional write.
Wisdom definitely does come from pain if we listen and learn. Love this multi-dimensional write.
16th Sep 2021 8:36pm
i do appreciate you reading my work.
thank you for taking the time to comment.
thank you for taking the time to comment.
