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SUFFOCATING
SUFFOCATE ME
NOW
nothing is
CUMMING
NOW
nothing is
CUMMING
Published 13th Aug 2021
Author's Note
NO MORE FOR ANY MORE FLYING SNAKE
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13th Aug 2021 2:10pm
15th Aug 2021 3:53am
SHALL
BUT DO place purple flowers
when deep breaths don't wake up again
again sis
again lastest
wish
BUT DO place purple flowers
when deep breaths don't wake up again
again sis
again lastest
wish
Anonymous
14th Aug 2021 8:15am
erotic asphyxiation...
There's a syntactical ambiguity in the poem which deepens it for me.
I like the author's note--it's as suggestive as the poem, with the same syntactical ambiguity.
Enjoyed!
There's a syntactical ambiguity in the poem which deepens it for me.
I like the author's note--it's as suggestive as the poem, with the same syntactical ambiguity.
Enjoyed!
15th Aug 2021 3:56am
at times all enjoy
the passing away of someone
who was in pain
suffocating is no fun poet
thanks for the syntax
and the relief you wish again all will sustain
the passing away of someone
who was in pain
suffocating is no fun poet
thanks for the syntax
and the relief you wish again all will sustain
Anonymous
16th Aug 2021 2:03am
Awe Bro…….this makes me sad……it’s hard to stay positive at times…….a lot going on these days……sending you smiles…….hang in there…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Aug 2021 4:57am
I PULLED THROUGH DECADES DON'T WORRY UNLESS I AM KILLED OR DIE IN AN ACCIDENT TODAY I NEARLY DID I SHALL LIVE TILL THE SUNSETS WHEN NONE CAN SAY AS I DRIVE THROUGH LIFE MY WAY BUT SEND PURPLE FLOWERS THAT DAY WHEN AGAIN DOES PHYSICALLY PASS AWAY STAND BY MY POETIC PURPLE SIS
Excuse caps night blindness
Excuse caps night blindness
