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monochromatic me
melancholia flirts
by peeking
certain choice pieces
are strewn about
s c a t t e r e d
sloppy
consequences
kind of a willing
random absence
flashes of festering
wishes left
while a haggard heart
choice ignores
most attempts
heavy is this act
of maintaining
a cocoon-like
comfortability
where alone
is
proper function
perfecting the niche
>>of solitude<<
becoming
a shadowy harbor
colors filter out,
slowing breaths
draining of
vibrant impact
grey power
imbues it's hue
hence,
this
monochromatic
me.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 9th Aug 2021
Author's Note
My #Nopoo from yesterday
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Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 12:05pm
My mirror gives no reflection on laughter each time o look
I bring it joy
It leaves misery
I bring it joy
It leaves misery
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 5:16pm
There's more to you than just the reflection in the mirror, Colin. It's your huge heart that's so beautiful, that I see reflected in every single gorgeous poem you publish....
Thank you, my dear friend, for all you help me with and the generosity of your warmth. I wouldn't be the same poetess today without you.
Much love and respect from across the pond...
✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
-S
Thank you, my dear friend, for all you help me with and the generosity of your warmth. I wouldn't be the same poetess today without you.
Much love and respect from across the pond...
✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - 💙
-S
Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 12:08pm
Re: Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 5:13pm
You're so awesome, Cipher.
I adore you.
Much love and respect, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
I adore you.
Much love and respect, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. monochromatic me
Anonymous
9th Aug 2021 12:16pm
felt it
have been
beautiful
even with
💔💔💔
fractured fairy
recognizing
shattered dryad
hoping small
comfort is found
In our fae embrace
have been
beautiful
even with
💔💔💔
fractured fairy
recognizing
shattered dryad
hoping small
comfort is found
In our fae embrace
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 5:24pm
It's the enormity of that comfort that I fucking take strength from and bask my tired soul in....
Oh how I truly love your words and the sheer kindness you so brilliantly pen upon my page and brand upon my psyche, my dear lady. Your Vanta might be the blackest substance known on earth but I can still feel it's dark reflection....piercing perfect
I know you know.
💙☯️♠
🖤🐰🐲🐍🖤
xo - 🌹
Oh how I truly love your words and the sheer kindness you so brilliantly pen upon my page and brand upon my psyche, my dear lady. Your Vanta might be the blackest substance known on earth but I can still feel it's dark reflection....piercing perfect
I know you know.
💙☯️♠
🖤🐰🐲🐍🖤
xo - 🌹
Re: Re. monochromatic me
Anonymous
9th Aug 2021 6:05pm
Swim in my lake of blackness, let the reflection of respective pain shared, bathe you in their understanding. Warm, silky and velveteen, my vanta pools, offer to float you and carry you along the way.
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Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 1:03pm
Hey gorgeous sorry to pee on your parade there's nothing monochromatic about you. You're a dazzling array of a prism of colours, all bright all beautiful and all very you. One day someone will break down your wall of solitude and steal that Velvet Blue heart of yours.
Great write my gorgeous friend but you are to bright and to beautiful to be monochromatic
Love and light my ball of Sunshine
Ron xx
Great write my gorgeous friend but you are to bright and to beautiful to be monochromatic
Love and light my ball of Sunshine
Ron xx
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 5:51pm
Ohhh, wow! ....
(blushing beet red!)
I am so grateful for your beautiful and elegant comments, my dear dear poet. I adore how you see me, and that knowledge is definitely something that motivates me to try to better myself, being and always striving to be a good version of that which you see (or close to it! ) Not changing myself but just keeping positive and open to growth and goodness.
All my heartfelt thanks,... for everything.
🌹 - 💋
💙 - B
(blushing beet red!)
I am so grateful for your beautiful and elegant comments, my dear dear poet. I adore how you see me, and that knowledge is definitely something that motivates me to try to better myself, being and always striving to be a good version of that which you see (or close to it! ) Not changing myself but just keeping positive and open to growth and goodness.
All my heartfelt thanks,... for everything.
🌹 - 💋
💙 - B
Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 1:39pm
There is no end, which I hope not, to the extent of your creativity. This is an amazing example. A++. Hugs and peace my Princess, xo O
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 5:32pm
Your kindness in comments is truly an unexpected delight, my lovely poet. I humbly thank you for your loveliness and I wholly appreciate you stopping by to read and leave me your thoughts. I have so missed you upon my page.... Very much so.
My smile is ear to ear and my pleasure is nose to toes... *wink
🌹 - 💙
B
My smile is ear to ear and my pleasure is nose to toes... *wink
🌹 - 💙
B
Anonymous
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9th Aug 2021 7:05pm
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
Not really my state of mind just adding to the feel of the poem and it's mention of broken pieces.... I couldn't really find a picture that I liked to add to this particular write and then I had this idea to create one out of my own.... I like that it's broken up and morphed a little, punctuating the moment pretty well.... 🤷🏻♀️ 👍🏻
Thanks for the RL add, Tim
I hope you enjoyed!
🌹 - B
Thanks for the RL add, Tim
I hope you enjoyed!
🌹 - B
Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 7:47pm
The mirror shows a beautiful hot sexy woman. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
9th Aug 2021 7:52pm
Re. monochromatic me
10th Aug 2021 2:39am
Perfecting the niche on the outside while poisoning the self. Beautiful and poignant write, love.
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
12th Aug 2021 10:43am
Your comments really mean a lot to me Jenny. Thanks for stopping by and leaving them for me to marinade in...
Always a pleasure, my lovely lady ✨ 💫
🌹 - 💙
B
Always a pleasure, my lovely lady ✨ 💫
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. monochromatic me
15th Aug 2021 9:44pm
Haha I can't even find my comment in the storm that is your page! Love you, Blue :)
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10th Aug 2021 5:29pm
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
12th Aug 2021 10:44am
Rew!
Yes, sometimes being completely broken apart makes it a bit easier to try and put it all back together again....
I adore your visit and your comments, Ty so much!
🌹 - 💙
B
Yes, sometimes being completely broken apart makes it a bit easier to try and put it all back together again....
I adore your visit and your comments, Ty so much!
🌹 - 💙
B
Anonymous
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15th Aug 2021 4:47pm
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
15th Aug 2021 4:49pm
haha 😂....
That's the intended effect!!
(probably better that way!)
giggling! 🤭
Ty, my lovely poet
🌹
That's the intended effect!!
(probably better that way!)
giggling! 🤭
Ty, my lovely poet
🌹
Re. monochromatic me
10th Aug 2021 6:59pm
Re: Re. monochromatic me
12th Aug 2021 10:49am
I concur, CS
It's subjective.... depending on who is reading and where/what their own emotions have taken them...
I really appreciate your visit - it means a lot that you've taken the time to read and to leave me your thoughts.....
I enjoy your spin on things, muchly.
🌹 - 💙
B
It's subjective.... depending on who is reading and where/what their own emotions have taken them...
I really appreciate your visit - it means a lot that you've taken the time to read and to leave me your thoughts.....
I enjoy your spin on things, muchly.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. monochromatic me
11th Aug 2021 3:25pm
This is a beautiful poem. The tone captures the grays, which are what makes or breaks a good photograph.
"perfecting the niche
>>of solitude<< "
The longer I live alone, the more colorful life becomes.
Monochrome evolved into Kodachrome as loneliness grew into solitude.
"perfecting the niche
>>of solitude<< "
The longer I live alone, the more colorful life becomes.
Monochrome evolved into Kodachrome as loneliness grew into solitude.
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
12th Aug 2021 10:56am
Ohh, KP.... I wish that I could reconcile loneliness and solitude as perfectly you've been able to describe in your comments here. I still find living alone as lonesome but I believe that I have gotten used to that lonesomeness not out of a wanted desire but out of force, due to the pandemic.. etc...
Yet, I can absolutely see the beauty in the multitude of colors you described, too .... as it sounds like a truly lovely space to be living in.
I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, it makes me feel less alone and more hopeful, if that makes sense!?!?
All my warmest appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B
Yet, I can absolutely see the beauty in the multitude of colors you described, too .... as it sounds like a truly lovely space to be living in.
I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, it makes me feel less alone and more hopeful, if that makes sense!?!?
All my warmest appreciation,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. monochromatic me
12th Aug 2021 00:51am
WOW! A self-portrait of yourself in monochrome. The concept is genius. And the way you play it out is brilliant. The metaphors unroll into a tapestry of your soul. And I follow stunned and in awe of what you do with this idea. This is real literary art that takes me into the heart of what it means to have insight that grasps the sparks of the spirit and rolls them into a monochromatic symbolism that makes me think and feel.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
12th Aug 2021 11:00am
I am all sorts of happy reading your "WOW!", John.
I thank you for that motivational exclamation, from the bottom of my heart! It's sometimes a difficult write to try to be open and self revealing and I utterly appreciate your thoughtfulness in the remarks you've left here.
You're a wonderful person and a very bright light of encouragement my friend... Ty Ty!!!
🌹 - 💙
Susan
I thank you for that motivational exclamation, from the bottom of my heart! It's sometimes a difficult write to try to be open and self revealing and I utterly appreciate your thoughtfulness in the remarks you've left here.
You're a wonderful person and a very bright light of encouragement my friend... Ty Ty!!!
🌹 - 💙
Susan
Re. monochromatic me
12th Aug 2021 5:15pm
I couldn't help but notice the way you structured this poem to reflect the image. I guess sometimes in the abstract of things, we can really break down parts of us and analyze them with detail for a better understanding.
Wonderful job.
Wonderful job.
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
15th Aug 2021 4:52pm
I actually couldn't find a pic that was liked to go along with the poem and decided to break my own after writing... So I am definitely glad that it came across to be so fully ingrained... I appreciate your thoughtful comments so much, my friend.
Ty for sharing and as always, for taking the time that you do.
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Ty for sharing and as always, for taking the time that you do.
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Re: Re. monochromatic me
15th Aug 2021 4:50pm
Awww... very nice comment, too.
Ty so much, Marks.
I really enjoy when you visit 🦋
🌹 - B
Ty so much, Marks.
I really enjoy when you visit 🦋
🌹 - B
Re: Re. monochromatic me
16th Aug 2021 00:39am
Re. monochromatic me
19th Aug 2021 7:08am
The true sin of humanity reveled
our homogenized existence stretching to eternity
a poem of exquisite sadness
illuminating the synthetic madness
of our imitation lives
What a beautifully sad poem, love this even if it made me cry a little bit.
our homogenized existence stretching to eternity
a poem of exquisite sadness
illuminating the synthetic madness
of our imitation lives
What a beautifully sad poem, love this even if it made me cry a little bit.
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Re: Re. monochromatic me
19th Aug 2021 8:12pm
Awww.... no tears, my lovely friend!
Ty for sharing your amazingly kind words and heartfelt sentiments with me.... I am so lucky to have you as such a wonderful friend.
My upmost respect and warm regards,
🌹-B
Ty for sharing your amazingly kind words and heartfelt sentiments with me.... I am so lucky to have you as such a wonderful friend.
My upmost respect and warm regards,
🌹-B
Anonymous
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