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Poor Little Posey
I stopped to look at some flowers today.
A simple act, to be certain.
I bent down,
with great trepidation of not getting back up,
to smell their scent.
The fragrances were heady and aromatic. Refreshing and pure.
The feel of the petals were luscious and smooth, soft and comforting.
I found myself comparing them to my favorite velvet blanket. The one I use only for decoration.
The same variety of flower in the next bed had been overwatered causing them to wilt and droop over.
They appeared lifeless and spent. Yet the color and perfume, while still prevalent, didn’t provide the same allure and I semi-quickly pivoted to another bed of more vibrant posies.
So many lovely varietals and hybrids I’d never before seen. Bursting in bloom and beauty.
Cautiously rising, I turned back to the wilted flowers, as it occurred to me they looked as I felt.
Bedraggled and passed-by.
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So I bought them!
A simple act, to be certain.
I bent down,
with great trepidation of not getting back up,
to smell their scent.
The fragrances were heady and aromatic. Refreshing and pure.
The feel of the petals were luscious and smooth, soft and comforting.
I found myself comparing them to my favorite velvet blanket. The one I use only for decoration.
The same variety of flower in the next bed had been overwatered causing them to wilt and droop over.
They appeared lifeless and spent. Yet the color and perfume, while still prevalent, didn’t provide the same allure and I semi-quickly pivoted to another bed of more vibrant posies.
So many lovely varietals and hybrids I’d never before seen. Bursting in bloom and beauty.
Cautiously rising, I turned back to the wilted flowers, as it occurred to me they looked as I felt.
Bedraggled and passed-by.
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So I bought them!
Written by
Honoria
Published 9th Aug 2021
| Edited 14th Sep 2021
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Re. Poor Little Posey
9th Aug 2021 2:37am
I adore this write, H!
How perfectly you describe those poor little posies... I felt so bad for them and related, completely! ... lol... Now, my heart soars knowing that they're back to their full glory (for a little while anyway!) , accomplishing their intended purpose... and bringing you such joy with their beauty!!
There's definitely an awesome parable here!
Well done, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
How perfectly you describe those poor little posies... I felt so bad for them and related, completely! ... lol... Now, my heart soars knowing that they're back to their full glory (for a little while anyway!) , accomplishing their intended purpose... and bringing you such joy with their beauty!!
There's definitely an awesome parable here!
Well done, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
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9th Aug 2021 4:31am
Dear BV,
I’m so glad you can appreciate their new life as I did. They really perked up once I got them home and dried off. Quite the flirty eye catchers they are now. Thank you so much for sifting out my message. I knew you’d get it. And for the RL add, gracias. X
H🌷
I’m so glad you can appreciate their new life as I did. They really perked up once I got them home and dried off. Quite the flirty eye catchers they are now. Thank you so much for sifting out my message. I knew you’d get it. And for the RL add, gracias. X
H🌷
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 4:39pm
Dear R,
Thank you. I’m touched you could see this as a painting and if it brought you some goodness to start your day my job here is done. 😊
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. H🌷
Thank you. I’m touched you could see this as a painting and if it brought you some goodness to start your day my job here is done. 😊
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
9th Aug 2021 1:14pm
Dear H,
This is a fantastic write that pulls the reader in swiftly. I was with you smelling the flowers, touching the petals. Lovely softness to the write that compliments the subject here, and the relating self is really nice. Great write!
warmly,
usra 💜
This is a fantastic write that pulls the reader in swiftly. I was with you smelling the flowers, touching the petals. Lovely softness to the write that compliments the subject here, and the relating self is really nice. Great write!
warmly,
usra 💜
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 4:42pm
Dear U,
I knew that was you next to me! 😉
Thank you ever so kindly for this lovely comment. I’m over the moon by your interpretation. I’m very glad you could take this little jaunt with me. Thank you again. H🌷
I knew that was you next to me! 😉
Thank you ever so kindly for this lovely comment. I’m over the moon by your interpretation. I’m very glad you could take this little jaunt with me. Thank you again. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
9th Aug 2021 5:45pm
i'm right there with you. feeling like wilted flowers.
we should start a club!
we should start a club!
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 4:45pm
Dear DG,
We should start a club. What do we call it? “Wilted and Fabulous!”? There’s spunk in us yet.
Thank you so much for reading and commiserating in the wilt. 😊
And about that club…what are we serving for snacks?😉 H🌷
We should start a club. What do we call it? “Wilted and Fabulous!”? There’s spunk in us yet.
Thank you so much for reading and commiserating in the wilt. 😊
And about that club…what are we serving for snacks?😉 H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 2:09pm
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Dear A,
You could knock me over with a dropped petal! I’m honored and so very flattered. Thank you very much for this kindness. I’m grateful and so pleased you enjoyed. Thank you for the lovely nomination and for the RL add. Xo
H🌷
You could knock me over with a dropped petal! I’m honored and so very flattered. Thank you very much for this kindness. I’m grateful and so pleased you enjoyed. Thank you for the lovely nomination and for the RL add. Xo
H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 4:10pm
We can still be or stay wilted under the kind words of others. In my experience, loving yourself is where true blooming begins.
It tickles my heart that you chose the wilted flowers, though. They need a kind home, too. Love this piece, H!
It tickles my heart that you chose the wilted flowers, though. They need a kind home, too. Love this piece, H!
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 4:53pm
Dear E,
Loving yourself and true bloom, it’s so right and yet some days absolutely impossible. I so much, want to unlock that mystery as to why that is. They did need a home and so far so good, I haven’t killed them. 😉
As per, thank you for the RL list and wonderful comment. Xx
H🌷
Loving yourself and true bloom, it’s so right and yet some days absolutely impossible. I so much, want to unlock that mystery as to why that is. They did need a home and so far so good, I haven’t killed them. 😉
As per, thank you for the RL list and wonderful comment. Xx
H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
Anonymous
10th Aug 2021 5:50pm
You are a natural storyteller! This reminds me of adopting a shelter dog and bringing home the most ragged and gruesome looking canine of the bunch.
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 7:02pm
Dear JB,
That is the sweetest compliment. Thank you kindly for that observation. I’m very touched.
Did you actually do that with a shelter dog? Because I’ve seen some shelter dogs and you’re right, a lot of them look like the last chapter but they have personalities of gold.
Thank you again for this lovely comment. H🌷
That is the sweetest compliment. Thank you kindly for that observation. I’m very touched.
Did you actually do that with a shelter dog? Because I’ve seen some shelter dogs and you’re right, a lot of them look like the last chapter but they have personalities of gold.
Thank you again for this lovely comment. H🌷
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2021 8:50pm
Yes, true story. Adopted a Shi Tzu with the crookedest teeth ever, but as a gift for an elderly family member in need of companionship. He was treated like a prince thereafter. And whenever it came to giving him a haircut, he would bite me like a rabid maniac and scream bloody murder.
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
11th Aug 2021 5:30am
Re. Poor Little Posey
10th Aug 2021 11:34pm
Quite a moving theme. Seeing beauty where perhaps that beauty has wilted or is not so apparent at first.
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
11th Aug 2021 5:34am
Dear L,
It’s so easy to overlook beauty when it’s not shiny and bright. Taking that extra a minute to appreciate what was underneath was a huge reminder to me not to be so quick to overlook. Thank you dearly for your
Kind comment and RL add. H🌷
It’s so easy to overlook beauty when it’s not shiny and bright. Taking that extra a minute to appreciate what was underneath was a huge reminder to me not to be so quick to overlook. Thank you dearly for your
Kind comment and RL add. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
12th Aug 2021 3:15pm
I liked the sympathy you felt. I bet they came back to life once you took them home.
Wonderful spill Honoria. It's uplifting and a reminder of the beauty around us.
Wonderful spill Honoria. It's uplifting and a reminder of the beauty around us.
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
12th Aug 2021 5:35pm
Dear W,
They did perk right up, thank you.
It’s funny isn’t it, how sometimes we blow past something that doesn’t quite catch our attention because at first glance they aren’t stunning. A little love sure does make a difference. Thank you for your sweet comment. It made for another lovely flower to my day. H🌷
They did perk right up, thank you.
It’s funny isn’t it, how sometimes we blow past something that doesn’t quite catch our attention because at first glance they aren’t stunning. A little love sure does make a difference. Thank you for your sweet comment. It made for another lovely flower to my day. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
18th Aug 2021 7:37pm
Life among the flowers is perhaps the highest form of existence. Your spiritually integrated nature is palpable in this write. Profoundly beautiful.
I, too, very much appreciate the wilted flowers. There is so much, poetically/philosophically, in this symbolism.
And I like what you did, in this regard.
(I think I will do the flower poem! Thank you for inspiring me!)
I, too, very much appreciate the wilted flowers. There is so much, poetically/philosophically, in this symbolism.
And I like what you did, in this regard.
(I think I will do the flower poem! Thank you for inspiring me!)
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
19th Aug 2021 5:11am
Dear CO,
Thank you for this wonderful comment. It’s made my night and I really treasure that. Thank you for adding it to your RL. I’m so flattered.
Again, thank you very much. H🌷
Thank you for this wonderful comment. It’s made my night and I really treasure that. Thank you for adding it to your RL. I’m so flattered.
Again, thank you very much. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
19th Aug 2021 8:45am
Re. Poor Little Posey
19th Aug 2021 12:17pm
Dear H,
Shame on me for missing this gem when it first popped up! I also have a penchant for bringing home the things that need a little extra love (it's actually the sole criteria by which I choose a Christmas tree each year, much to the chagrin of those who prefer lush & bushy...). I enjoyed this little stroll though the flowers with you. 🙂
❤k
Shame on me for missing this gem when it first popped up! I also have a penchant for bringing home the things that need a little extra love (it's actually the sole criteria by which I choose a Christmas tree each year, much to the chagrin of those who prefer lush & bushy...). I enjoyed this little stroll though the flowers with you. 🙂
❤k
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
20th Aug 2021 4:25am
Dear K,
LOL! I must see your Christmas tree.
Please tell me it curves and has major holes where the branches are missing and you have to glom it up with tinsel and decorations. (For heaven sake! I just spent five minutes looking for the damn Christmas tree emoji and only see Santa and Mrs Santa!)
Anyway! It really was a lovely day at the nursery. Flowers are so pretty. I don’t have a green thumb but I do have a great appreciation for them.
I’m so glad you enjoyed this. You are welcome to tag along anytime! Xx
H🌷
LOL! I must see your Christmas tree.
Please tell me it curves and has major holes where the branches are missing and you have to glom it up with tinsel and decorations. (For heaven sake! I just spent five minutes looking for the damn Christmas tree emoji and only see Santa and Mrs Santa!)
Anyway! It really was a lovely day at the nursery. Flowers are so pretty. I don’t have a green thumb but I do have a great appreciation for them.
I’m so glad you enjoyed this. You are welcome to tag along anytime! Xx
H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
Anonymous
25th Aug 2021 5:16pm
Awe H…….beautiful ink…….some flowers just like us need luv to stand tall again……next time your in the shop…….let me know……maybe we can have lunch……Lol! Luv this…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
25th Aug 2021 5:21pm
Dear FG,
Consider that a date! Lunch amid the flowers sounds divine. And I couldn’t agree more that a little TLC will snap anything/one right back to beauty and life. Thank you kindly for this lovely comment and RL add. Xx
H🌷
Consider that a date! Lunch amid the flowers sounds divine. And I couldn’t agree more that a little TLC will snap anything/one right back to beauty and life. Thank you kindly for this lovely comment and RL add. Xx
H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
26th Aug 2021 10:35pm
What a lovely poem. And yes,how easy it is to overlook something that isn't quite perfect.
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
27th Aug 2021 1:12am
Dear S,
Thank you so much for your read and kind comment. I’m very grateful for your visit tonight. Thank you again. H🌷
Thank you so much for your read and kind comment. I’m very grateful for your visit tonight. Thank you again. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
4th Sep 2021 11:05am
Wonderful write H ... love it ... captures the way I feel sometimes ...
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
4th Sep 2021 2:24pm
Dear L,
Aawww thank you so much for this lovely comment and RL add. The best way to start the day, I couldn’t be more grateful. Thank you. H🌷
Aawww thank you so much for this lovely comment and RL add. The best way to start the day, I couldn’t be more grateful. Thank you. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
6th Sep 2021 10:20am
Yes! This is so beautiful and relatable to me. My spirituality is all tied up in nature soo this poem is particularly meaningful to me. It made me think of my rescue dog philosophy. You see when I go to adopt a dog it's always from a shelter. The first thing I ask for is to see the oldest dog they have or the unwanted ones that have been there the longest. Then I pick the overlooked one to take home and spoil giving them the love and forever home they so deserve. I can't seem to help myself. So thank you for a most precious post! I love it.
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6th Sep 2021 7:23pm
Dear FM,
This doesn’t surprise me at all. A heart as big as yours this makes perfect sense. Spreading love to those in need and offering sanctuary, you’re awesome. Thank you so much for the RL add and your lovely comment. It brings such joy, thank you. H🌷
This doesn’t surprise me at all. A heart as big as yours this makes perfect sense. Spreading love to those in need and offering sanctuary, you’re awesome. Thank you so much for the RL add and your lovely comment. It brings such joy, thank you. H🌷
Re. Poor Little Posey
6th Dec 2021 1:23pm
Hilarious, loved it but I'm pretty sure it's quite untrue
Tell me if it were true
How could a wilted flower
Create a garden littery wonder
How could I,
Find the aroma of yours words
Overwhelming in their simplistic majesty
How could they command my digits
To write of their wonder and warmth
No, I asure you
There must be
Another reason
As to why you would think thus
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Tell me if it were true
How could a wilted flower
Create a garden littery wonder
How could I,
Find the aroma of yours words
Overwhelming in their simplistic majesty
How could they command my digits
To write of their wonder and warmth
No, I asure you
There must be
Another reason
As to why you would think thus
💜💜💜
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Re: Re. Poor Little Posey
6th Dec 2021 8:31pm
Dear W,
A humorist as well as a poet! What a delicious comment and thank you for your generous RL add. Those poor flowers. I would say before I killed them off they were quite a bright and cheerful addition in the house. Thank you so much for your read and comment. Very much appreciated! H🌷
A humorist as well as a poet! What a delicious comment and thank you for your generous RL add. Those poor flowers. I would say before I killed them off they were quite a bright and cheerful addition in the house. Thank you so much for your read and comment. Very much appreciated! H🌷