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Close to you
Close to you
Holding you while you’re holding me, my heart beats so happily.
Your skin on mine, souls intertwine, everything stops, paused in time.
Holding you while you’re holding me. My eyes open and you’re all I see.
Gracefully and passionately your hand in mine,
So perfectly.
Holding you while you’re holding me, no place I’d rather be. Just you and me!
Holding you while you’re holding me, my heart beats so happily.
Your skin on mine, souls intertwine, everything stops, paused in time.
Holding you while you’re holding me. My eyes open and you’re all I see.
Gracefully and passionately your hand in mine,
So perfectly.
Holding you while you’re holding me, no place I’d rather be. Just you and me!
Published 30th Jul 2021
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30th Jul 2021 8:13am
Has a 'Carpenters' feel about it.
'My eyes open, you're all I see' may help with the flow a little.
'My eyes open, you're all I see' may help with the flow a little.
30th Jul 2021 3:20pm
30th Jul 2021 3:38pm
30th Jul 2021 7:12pm
I like your new arrangement of the lines here.
On my laptop, they're spaced out & read as 5 separate lines & it really seems to work that way.
On my laptop, they're spaced out & read as 5 separate lines & it really seems to work that way.
