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THE EYE OF THE STORM

She invites the storm
And risks losing so much, just
To be in his eye

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 28th Jul 2021

#senryu #storm

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Re. THE EYE OF THE STORM

28th Jul 2021 3:03am

Really?

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Re. THE EYE OF THE STORM

28th Jul 2021 2:56pm

I love this.
❤

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28th Jul 2021 9:45pm

Glad

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Re. THE EYE OF THE STORM

28th Jul 2021 4:08pm

Dear S,

I like the frenzied need as the undercurrent in this. It�s tight and felt. Great write. H🌷

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28th Jul 2021 9:45pm

It�s dangerous

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Re. THE EYE OF THE STORM

28th Jul 2021 11:15pm

she would do - smiles

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Re. THE EYE OF THE STORM

31st Jul 2021 3:37am

He who dares wins.

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