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The Carnival Has a Bunch of Rides
She couldn't see a mystery
watching questions seep
from his wounds.
More of a riddle
that told a joke
that nobody understood.
watching questions seep
from his wounds.
More of a riddle
that told a joke
that nobody understood.
Published 27th Jul 2021
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27th Jul 2021 11:43pm
28th Jul 2021 00:39am
Sounds like how some of my relationships ended.
Excellent.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Excellent.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
29th Jul 2021 5:43am
Dear N,
You’ve done it! You’ve just summed up how I feel about myself “More of a riddle
that told a joke
that nobody understood.”
Freakin brilliant. H🌷
You’ve done it! You’ve just summed up how I feel about myself “More of a riddle
that told a joke
that nobody understood.”
Freakin brilliant. H🌷
6th Aug 2021 4:01am
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