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Role Reversal?
as you stand there
make no mistake
when I am
on my knees before you
licking
teasing
biting
caressing
tasting
it is not
submission
but
control
of
our
pleasure
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
make no mistake
when I am
on my knees before you
licking
teasing
biting
caressing
tasting
it is not
submission
but
control
of
our
pleasure
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 25th Jul 2021
Author's Note
Sometimes in BDSM, what appears to outsiders as submission is an illusion.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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25th Jul 2021 7:33pm
25th Jul 2021 7:36pm
I would love to see BDSM in its most primitive reversed role... mm.. I got skills my poet on a level you will never come to understand, starting with that word play... Don't threaten me with a good time...😘
25th Jul 2021 11:06pm
29th Jul 2021 9:05pm
You capture the control that can be exerted through submissiveness perfectly. Playing only one role limits the true extent of passion, pleasure, and pain...
