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Still Nurturing Our Friendship
I text my old friend
We laugh about things from college
He invites me there
We laugh about things from college
He invites me there
Published 25th Jul 2021
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By Pent
July 24th, 2021
July 24th, 2021
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25th Jul 2021 4:21am
Dear M,
Delightfully bright this write. Filled with levity and fondness. I enjoyed “ We laugh about things from college” there is so much fun tripping down memory lane. Lovely write. H🌷
Delightfully bright this write. Filled with levity and fondness. I enjoyed “ We laugh about things from college” there is so much fun tripping down memory lane. Lovely write. H🌷
Thank you H🌹,
I had to change the last word from 'over', to 'there', to have five syllables, and I like it better :)
I had to change the last word from 'over', to 'there', to have five syllables, and I like it better :)
Anonymous
25th Jul 2021 5:50am
A senryu...
Visiting old school friends seems like a very good topic for a senryu. I'm not sure why, but it works well.
Visiting old school friends seems like a very good topic for a senryu. I'm not sure why, but it works well.
25th Jul 2021 4:28pm
26th Jul 2021 2:04am
26th Jul 2021 2:24am
Thanks Robert,
I'm fortunate to have a friend that always makes me feel like we see, and talk to each other daily, even when it's really been many months.
I'm fortunate to have a friend that always makes me feel like we see, and talk to each other daily, even when it's really been many months.
