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Complexities
What's wrong with me?
I read poems
But I can't seem
To focus
And analyze
Worth a penny.
Tired. Body tired?
Brain tired?
Saturated?
Ok, some poems
Seem to me
Full of multi-layers
Of different meanings
On many levels.
Over done.
Superfluous complexities.
I read poems
But I can't seem
To focus
And analyze
Worth a penny.
Tired. Body tired?
Brain tired?
Saturated?
Ok, some poems
Seem to me
Full of multi-layers
Of different meanings
On many levels.
Over done.
Superfluous complexities.
Published 23rd Jul 2021
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23rd Jul 2021 5:20am
23rd Jul 2021 2:18pm
23rd Jul 2021 7:55am
Sometimes it's complicated... sometimes having an urge to be so abstract in writing, is where the inspiration flows... and sometimes it's as easy as 17 syllables....
I empathize with the idea of what you're saying here.... it can be frustrating... we beings of varied complexity... lol.
Nicely penned, Robert!
I empathize with the idea of what you're saying here.... it can be frustrating... we beings of varied complexity... lol.
Nicely penned, Robert!
23rd Jul 2021 2:22pm
Maybe. I just don't get the idea of WANTING to be so abstract and in the midst of some nebula nebulous world.... Always love to see you around. Regards, Robert.
23rd Jul 2021 4:50pm
23rd Jul 2021 7:43pm
25th Jul 2021 10:49am
Superfluous complexities?
Hmmm!
It is complicated.
I feel your thoughts.
Interesting and introspective.
Hmmm!
It is complicated.
I feel your thoughts.
Interesting and introspective.
25th Jul 2021 11:27am
Ya. They are sometimes. Like trying to to make your way through an incredibly convoluted complex. Regards, Robert.
29th Jul 2021 9:13pm
Many times I am abstract to avoid opening completely on certain things from the past. I suppose you could say I am guarded and so often writing in multiple layers. Dancing around certain things... I guess I am saying I can understand how it might be frustrating leaving a lot to interpretation sometimes. :)
29th Jul 2021 10:21pm
It is. I suppose it is like trying to peel an onion.....and trying to decypher where there are few clues and (to mixt stuff) , too many layers of clouds. Regards, Robert.
29th Jul 2021 10:54pm
29th Jul 2021 11:26pm
9th Aug 2021 10:57pm
It can be said that there times when the poem doesn't reach you or doesn't come up to the surface like you thought it should. I found that when I step away and come back to it, only then do I capture more of it and understand it. Or sometimes I just may misinterpret all completely. That's the tricky part of poetry.
