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Anonymous
18th Jul 2021 3:46am
So Much Depends Upon--
I think I like it.
I wish I knew what "stupid" means here...wow...is it like a name, as in "hey stupid!" or a person, like the person referred to as "stupid," or the noun, as in stupid things...
As a senryu, it leaves me deeply dis-satisfied, really wanting to, as they say, "know more"...
Whets my appetite.
I think I like it.
I wish I knew what "stupid" means here...wow...is it like a name, as in "hey stupid!" or a person, like the person referred to as "stupid," or the noun, as in stupid things...
As a senryu, it leaves me deeply dis-satisfied, really wanting to, as they say, "know more"...
Whets my appetite.
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