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Heaven's Gate
Heavens Gate
All through life we may move slow
Not like watching the grass grow
At times were in a hurry
We don’t stop or slowdown to worry
When we get older we do slowdown
Our skin may wrinkle and look like a frown
The only time were never late
When were going up to heavens gate
All through life we may move slow
Not like watching the grass grow
At times were in a hurry
We don’t stop or slowdown to worry
When we get older we do slowdown
Our skin may wrinkle and look like a frown
The only time were never late
When were going up to heavens gate
Published 23rd Feb 2012
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24th Feb 2012 5:33am
I like this poem. In Stead of doing four stanzas use two. put
All through life we may move slow
Not like watching the grass grow
At times were in a hurry
We don’t stop or slowdown to worry
Togethere
and the others together to have a aa bb cc dd scyme
All through life we may move slow
Not like watching the grass grow
At times were in a hurry
We don’t stop or slowdown to worry
Togethere
and the others together to have a aa bb cc dd scyme
24th Feb 2012 1:39pm
Thank You
I write my poems but I’m not a poet
I don’t understand poems and I know it
Here I am reading and trying to understand
This is hard for me, it’s much a demand
Most all my poems come from my heart
The poems are with love and stand apart
I post my poems for people to see
I know your comments are to help me
My past poems are fact and true
I appreciate your help and thank you
I write my poems but I’m not a poet
I don’t understand poems and I know it
Here I am reading and trying to understand
This is hard for me, it’s much a demand
Most all my poems come from my heart
The poems are with love and stand apart
I post my poems for people to see
I know your comments are to help me
My past poems are fact and true
I appreciate your help and thank you
11th Mar 2012 2:32am
We who have called upon the Lord's name will enter the gates one day. Moving and a poem of reality. Great write.
11th Mar 2012 4:22am
