🎸 Soo Sadd

Depression, the deep abyss depression, is the devil.
I love your little guitar shaped poem. The poem is sad, but the shape gives it a lyrical quality. It’s an interesting juxtaposition.

Thanks Eerie, it was a fun melody of malady!

Way to play that guitar ... nice concrete poem ...

Heh thanks =) My guitar skillz are about as advanced as this poem haha. Started out as only the lines "I'm so depressed" over and over. Then the 'song' from Scott Pilgram (youtube link) popped into my head and bam, boring became satire! I try not to take myself too seriously.

Not only is this in the design of a guitar, but a bottle as well! How many people sink their lives into the bottom of a bottle and drown in depression? I just realized that repetition like this really really works in patterned poetry!

I also enjoyed that you had fun! That's the Gem(ini) in you! xo

Ah yes, a sad truth there, and perhaps also a subconscious "coincidence."

I do agree that the repetition really aided in this visually, creating more value than I initially thought there would be. Just goes to show that having fun can really deliver surprises! Thanks for reading, friend =)

This production generates impressions, very much like an installation of high art.  Interacted with my senses in a very cool way.  I know you will, but allow me to implore you to always follow your inspiration.

Thanks Cipher, happy to have provided an engaging piece.

Time to look up at the stars..........

The night sky has always been so soothing, I could get lost for hours in the stars.