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Life Journey
placed
in this world
to make choices
each
altering our path
however slightly
leading
to places
unplanned unimagined
choices made
thinking
we are in control
or
those thrust upon us
unexpectedly
joys
hardships pains
pleasures
each
bringing us
closer
to
our
destiny
death
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
in this world
to make choices
each
altering our path
however slightly
leading
to places
unplanned unimagined
choices made
thinking
we are in control
or
those thrust upon us
unexpectedly
joys
hardships pains
pleasures
each
bringing us
closer
to
our
destiny
death
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 3rd Jul 2021
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3rd Jul 2021 6:02pm
I completely felt the format of this piece flowing perfectly from line to line.... it really impacted my read and punctuated your write perfectly, KP... succinct and the brevity permeates....
Excellent!
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Excellent!
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6th Jul 2021 9:11pm
I think we are victims if we don’t acknowledge our mortality.
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4th Jul 2021 3:50am
Quite. And some of our choices do not make the journey any easier. Hugs and kisses, Robert.
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