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It's about those titillating little arousals
Feather-like softness
juxtaposed
with sharp edges
it's that
fucking mixture
O' divine
is temptation
in all it's salty sweetness
as this
dire mouth waters
needy
and writhing
deeply
in delicate anticipation
whetted in perfect pursuit
a punk rock attitude
thrust of wills
and random
"fuck off ya cunts"
staunchly opinionated
laced with
clever funny
and lips—
that almost make me cum
from just thinking about it...
and all the makings of
exactly
what
makes
wet
wet.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
My #Nopoo for today..... just musings and my longstanding love of badboys..
My #Nopoo for today..... just musings and my longstanding love of badboys..
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 10:30am
Oh lovely
We all love a little wet, great write, awesome read
Love it gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
We all love a little wet, great write, awesome read
Love it gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 6:31pm
Thank you, my lovely friend. I am very grateful for the list add and all your loveliness in the kind words.... glad you enjoyed reading ✨
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - 💙
B
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 12:35pm
Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 6:30pm
I really like being an eye opener!! Thanks for the lovely comments, LV. I am so happy you enjoyed reading.
Always so wonderful to have you visit 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
Always so wonderful to have you visit 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 5:54pm
Saucy, indeed *wink
Thanks so much, Tim.
I appreciate the list add and you leaving your thoughts.
🌹 - B
Thanks so much, Tim.
I appreciate the list add and you leaving your thoughts.
🌹 - B
Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 4:05pm
I greatly appreciate your use of juxtaposition and contrast to initiate the organic flow of this piece and the oozing sensuality that results in the well executed movement. Nicely done Blue.
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 6:28pm
Thanks for the, Cipher
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the generous list add
Much appreciated,
🌹 - B
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the generous list add
Much appreciated,
🌹 - B
Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 4:20pm
Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 6:27pm
ohh, hmm .. that's kinda like ouch! ... 😔😖🥺😳
I'm certainly glad you read.... Leo thanks...
but it sounds like the title was he best part? 🤷🏻♀️
Sorry to disappoint, my friend 🙏🏻
I'm certainly glad you read.... Leo thanks...
but it sounds like the title was he best part? 🤷🏻♀️
Sorry to disappoint, my friend 🙏🏻
Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 6:38pm
Sorry, didn't mean it that way. More like you had me at "Titillating".
The rest of your work was more reference material for the 0088 file. Who wouldn't enjoy reading about your "Needs"!!!
😘😎🙊🌊
The rest of your work was more reference material for the 0088 file. Who wouldn't enjoy reading about your "Needs"!!!
😘😎🙊🌊
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 6:43pm
Doh, my bad.... thanks for the clarification... now I feel like an asshole.... true apologies - 🙏🏻
Guess my sensitive side is prevailing today..
but I, Ooooo @ mention of 0088
🕵🏻♀️🔍🔎🕵🏻♂️
Hubba Hubba... haha 😂...
Thanks, Leo
I love your visits and always value your thoughts.
🌹 - xo
B
Guess my sensitive side is prevailing today..
but I, Ooooo @ mention of 0088
🕵🏻♀️🔍🔎🕵🏻♂️
Hubba Hubba... haha 😂...
Thanks, Leo
I love your visits and always value your thoughts.
🌹 - xo
B
Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 7:30pm
Damn hot poem. You are burning me up. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 8:27pm
I need a cold shower. Damn, girl but you utterly destroy and then recreate the idea of porn. Sensations linger long after reading, velvet and musk, the taste of salt [pins and needle that]. teasing and loving at the same time, eternity stretching in endless agony and ecstasy, soul and body satiated. Ya, I need a cold shower.
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
Oooo... How I so love that comment (about the cold ❄ shower!) and twice!!! 🚿.. Lol.... I thank you for such awesome comments, Richard. I am so grateful that my poem was impactful as I hoped I could be... Agony and ecstasy share a similar type of taste or perhaps a sameness in their bouquet , I believe.... Scents or tastes that are recognized by that part of our brain that we utterly relish in, the abandon.....Ohh the sweet anguished gasps....
I thank you for understanding and I am enchanted by your feedback...
Much love and respect your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I thank you for understanding and I am enchanted by your feedback...
Much love and respect your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 10:22pm
Love the blend of eloquence with vulgarity ... romance with "do me now" ... kept me on edge ... again the drawn out spacing is exemplary ...
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
3rd Jul 2021 11:27pm
Sometimes I can't help that vulgar side from peeking out! ... haha.... I appreciate the read and the awesome remarks, LilD... It's so good to see you 🦋 and receive your valuable feedback.. it makes for such smiles and warmth...
Much appreciations, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Much appreciations, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
4th Jul 2021 7:56am
Those rebels without a cause often are favored by women. Your poem took hints of graphic content and wove them into a literary work with class. Love how you described attraction and the direction you took this poem in. Finely crafted down the last drop.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
4th Jul 2021 4:44pm
lol... yeah, I guess I'm a bit of a stereotype, in that regard. I think I have evolved with age, as my preferences recently have been way more on the studious nerdy side and less asshole badboy. To my utter benefit and joy! Lol... I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and I'm glad you liked every morsel, John..
Much thanks and appreciations, my dear
🌹 - 💙
S
Much thanks and appreciations, my dear
🌹 - 💙
S
Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
13th Jul 2021 11:29pm
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Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
29th Jul 2021 5:20pm
Liked that fact you didn't hold back. Sometimes brutal honesty and delivery is the best policy.
Well penned Blue.
Well penned Blue.
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Re: Re. It's about those titillating little arousals
29th Jul 2021 9:55pm