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... like a Phoenix
Blackened burnt beyond
left smoldering in embers—
Where I wait to RISE
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Summoning the strength....
my #Nopoo from a few days ago.
Summoning the strength....
my #Nopoo from a few days ago.
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Re. ... like a Phoenix
Anonymous
6th Jul 2021 6:15am
Hell yes, my burning blue <3
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6th Jul 2021 6:20am
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6th Jul 2021 7:03am
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6th Jul 2021 5:54pm
Re. ... like a Phoenix
6th Jul 2021 9:32am
Oh that was what i saw streaking through the night sky. You make my senrus sound so bland
In my humble opinion awesome
In my humble opinion awesome
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Re: Re. ... like a Phoenix
6th Jul 2021 5:56pm
lol... Was my shadow Phoenix, methinks!!.. lol
You are positively lovely and far too kind.... I adore you, my dear friend 🙏🏻
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - S
You are positively lovely and far too kind.... I adore you, my dear friend 🙏🏻
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - S
Re. ... like a Phoenix
6th Jul 2021 5:23pm
It seems to me you the Phoenix playing with matches. The pyro of winged flame igniting the souls of strangers so they my also rise.
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Re: Re. ... like a Phoenix
6th Jul 2021 5:32pm
Ohhhh, now those are some very yummy and awe inspiring comments.... I can only hope that is true in some small amount, my lovely poet 🙏🏻
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and your generous list add... it's nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and your generous list add... it's nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
Re. ... like a Phoenix
6th Jul 2021 7:17pm
You rise again my friend and you will receive orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing my beautiful smart strong sexy woman.
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6th Jul 2021 9:34pm
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7th Jul 2021 6:45pm
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6th Jul 2021 10:51pm
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6th Jul 2021 10:54pm
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7th Jul 2021 5:15am
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7th Jul 2021 6:33am
I do love me some senryú and haiku... Thanks, Remy.... I like your tanka formats alot, too!!
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
Re. ... like a Phoenix
7th Jul 2021 10:01am
Re: Re. ... like a Phoenix
7th Jul 2021 11:38am
Hey there Slip:)
It very well could be... probably a mixture of that as well as my life in general....the affects of all 'social distancing' certainly plays a role, yes.
Thanks for the question, so I could elaborate!
Nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
It very well could be... probably a mixture of that as well as my life in general....the affects of all 'social distancing' certainly plays a role, yes.
Thanks for the question, so I could elaborate!
Nice to see you 🦋
🌹 - B
Re. ... like a Phoenix
8th Jul 2021 3:31pm
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8th Jul 2021 3:37pm
Thanks, Cipher.
I really like your comments.... and appreciate them very much.
Much love, my friend
🌹 - 💙
I really like your comments.... and appreciate them very much.
Much love, my friend
🌹 - 💙
Re. ... like a Phoenix
21st Jul 2021 4:28am
Like a lazar of words that points directly into the fire of your poem. Truly brilliant my friend. Clear as an uncloudy sky at noon.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. ... like a Phoenix
21st Jul 2021 8:54am
Thank you, my friend 🙏🏻
You are a source of great light and inspiration.
I don't believe all my thank you's will ever be enough.... just know that I am.
🌹-💙
All the best in your days ahead,
-Susan
xoxo
You are a source of great light and inspiration.
I don't believe all my thank you's will ever be enough.... just know that I am.
🌹-💙
All the best in your days ahead,
-Susan
xoxo
Re. ... like a Phoenix
31st Jul 2021 6:04pm
I've always loved the Phoenix myth and symbol (my first avatar here was one, my favorite classical piece is Firebird), but this is one is awesome.
And your senryu...perfection.
And your senryu...perfection.
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Re: Re. ... like a Phoenix
31st Jul 2021 10:29pm
Thanks so much for sharing, Walter... I didn't know.... I too, adore that myth. There is just the best feeling behind being reborn from the ashes... redemption, I suppose... Soooo good!
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and all your kindness... it means the world to me!
🌹 - 💙
B
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and all your kindness... it means the world to me!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. ... like a Phoenix
26th Oct 2021 11:37pm
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26th Oct 2021 11:51pm
I really appreciate you thinking so, Sweet O.
It's an image I ran across while searching for something else (if I remember correctly) and I felt compelled, considering my mood at the time! ....Thanks for looking back....
Always a true pleasure to have you visit 🦋
Hope you are doing well.
🌹 - B
It's an image I ran across while searching for something else (if I remember correctly) and I felt compelled, considering my mood at the time! ....Thanks for looking back....
Always a true pleasure to have you visit 🦋
Hope you are doing well.
🌹 - B
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27th Oct 2021 11:15pm
Re. ... like a Phoenix
You, the savior when the "Scorched Earth" obstructionist to your happiness gets in the way.
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Re. ... like a Phoenix
6th Aug 2024 9:04pm