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money shot
love is kind like a
glory hole
someone shows
you only the most
primal part of
themselves
and they keep their
heart, mind and
soul hidden behind
a wall
a few minutes later
they are gone
leaving very little
of importance
behind
Published 28th Jun 2021
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28th Jun 2021 8:27am
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30th Jun 2021 6:20am
Dear BK,
Ugh! How true. This is the perfect description of that hollow feeling. It’s just so deflating and you’ve so aptly defined it. This really makes me wonder why so many of us hide these feelings behind this wall and just make these hit and run passes? Great write. H🌷
Ugh! How true. This is the perfect description of that hollow feeling. It’s just so deflating and you’ve so aptly defined it. This really makes me wonder why so many of us hide these feelings behind this wall and just make these hit and run passes? Great write. H🌷
2nd Jul 2021 4:12am
Thank you, Honoria. I sometimes wonder if love, how it stands at present, if really worth it.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
23rd Jul 2021 5:02pm
So many folks close themselves up and leave certain things vulnerable, only to make them feel more empty.
Thought provoking write bk.
Thought provoking write bk.
24th Jul 2021 1:27am
