Two years

Beautiful. Simple, but full of emotion

A cleverly constructed, complete poem, cramming so much of the confusion and horror of grief into such few words. Thanks for the read.

i liked the 'complete'.
thank you both for stopping by

For a poem so small just a ton of emotion in it..nice job

There is something... delicious and hypnotic about this.

I really liked it. It's such a pure, poetic image.

i really appreciate your comment :)
very glad you liked this piece

Ah! The lithe allure of minimalism! (And punctuation). The way you have personified an ampersand into a physical tether is admirabley creative. I wonder what you could do to an umlaut?

Love it, btw. :D

umlaut? that's a brilliant idea! i'll take a look at it more closely and think if i can come up with something.
Aish you're my fave.

As creative as you are I'm sure this "small" endeavor will sparkle.

Too kind, you are far too kind <3

flattered :)
no im not too kind, you're too good. you really are!

you always
had and have a dear
so near
of that there is no fear
coz we all others
only your poetry endear
over here  

we have many ampersands
in our beaches
and
love laying around sunning mainly

sweetness over powers us slowly
ampersands we become
slowly slowly
your poetry is exclusively
lovely
aspiring many an ampersands
like me  mainly