Writhed

I do adore few words...

The breath and the heartbeat of your gentle soul.

I believe it is about to entrust the life to the person you love, and from which you want to be loved.

How can you manage with so few lines to convey so much. This is the question on everyone's mind, reading your thoughts, I think.

oh Luca and Violet im very grateful for your lovely comments :)

such a lot said of so few words ~ Very well done

appreciated :)

All you need is one verse.
Wonderful!

you are wonderful!
thank you :)

No other word for what you can do with so few words :)

much appreciated :)

This brings to mind that hands-on experience is the best teacher.

Another short poem with the theme of longing...I cannot compose like you. I wish I could.

don't compose like me. compose like yourself with your unique and beautiful style :)
thank you for the comment

A very brief, beautiful poem. I felt almost startled with how delicate the imagery is within these words.

im thrilled for receiving such a beautiful comment from you.
Im glad you liked it

your writing is always beautiful

thank you :)

Short and beautifully written
Reminds me of Japanese poetry
Delightful
Kitty

i absolutely love Haiku.
thank you Kitty :) glad you came by

so simple , yet so awesome :)

appreciated :)