Aspersion.

I'll be honest I had to look some words up but I could infer.  I like this Blue.

Don't worry about it, my friend ... me too... lol.
It's just a little something to see if I could actually write in this style and make something worth reading... 🤷🏻‍♀️

Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!
It's a pure kindness you show me :)

just let me get my dictionary... 🙈 I will make a study of this🤔

lol.... Thanks, my lovely lady.... 😂
I hope you enjoyed ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

Dear BV,

So this is about a unicorn, right?

Noooooo! I’m just funnin’ ya! 😉
I think you’ve done a a magnificent job recreating eloquent writing. In and of itself it’s a lost art with so much by way of manners and civilized behavior.

Inner turmoil and strife abound. It’s hard to stay melancholy in this style because the words float the reader away. Can’t fib though, there are a lot of cool vocab words I’ve got to continue studying for the quiz on Friday.

Great write. Seriously, well done. I’m very impressed. H🌷

I thank you for reading and I giggle in ref to your Fri quiz!!! hahaha 🤭... I felt the same way. I researched a bit but I'm sure I used some words in the wrong context... so no testing!!! lol...

I'm glad I could impress, that's sure a relief! This was just a whim I had to learn something new  
I know there's a serious learning curve for myself and that this is a hard read to make heads or tails of.... I hope the gist comes through.... methinks?!.... lol....  
Lovely comments, my dear lady  
Your support is priceless  
🌹 - 💙
xo  
B

A literary fantasia of subtle and esoteric qualities that enchanted my mind. You juggled metaphors into a poem that exceeds mere versifying. You wove this into a magical combination of words that grasps me with the beauty of what poetry can be when it rises to the heights of composition.

Xo
John

.. and here I was just playing around with language and hoping not to make an utter fool of myself!! ....
Your summation has me exhaling my concerns, in a nice cleansing deep breath. Thank you for reading and appreciating my old english inspired attempt to beautify a darker piece of poetry....

I was very very hesitant to publish, so I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments and the list add, John.

All my warmest regards and deepest gratitude,
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
-Susan

Your poem is to poetry what Pollock's paintings are to art. The intimate deeper aesthetic qualities like abstract art where the form becomes the beauty. I love what you wrote here my friend.

Xo
John

Ok gorgeous you lost me, I'm just a peasant from London that was Shakespeare stuff lol
But what I understood was awesome
Loved the old style, way out my league
Love and light
Ron x

hahaha... I get that completely! I know it might have been kinda difficult to get through. It's more the fluidity of the language, anyway... lol...
Thanks for reading, the generous list add and your comments, my lovely friend 🙏🏻  
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xo
B

YES! Sounds of the Bard of Avon, Sir William S. A+++ Hugs, peace, and xo, oral

Haha....Thanks, Oral.
I tried my best to use archaic old english of the past. (obviously!) I'm all smiles you appreciate.
My gratitude is yours, kind sir... ;)  
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B

I love poems that aren't the usual. Also think it's great you try different styles. It'll take you far. Wonderful ink 😁

I appreciate the comments, DC. Just messing around with language. Much thanks for the lovely sentiments, the list add and your motivation.... I hope it does take me far!


Always a joy ✨
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B

It is rare that a poem totally takes me away ... pulls me in ... lulls me into an awaken sleepwalk ... this is such a poem ... so fluid ... timeless in its voice ...  mystic ... mythic ... after I read it I had to stop ... think about the perfect musical accompaniment ... I am a big New Age music fan ... David Arkenstone is one of my favorites ... "Ancient Legend" is one of his most moving pieces ... I found it a nice soundtrack to my rereading ... excellent work dear B ... loved all of the sibilance ... the layout is pleasing to the eye ... cadence was perfect ...

I can't help but be breathless by your comments, LilD. I do my best to keep myself busy learning by trying new things, when it comes to writing. My success rate there usually is low but at least I know that I can improve upon an existing attempt... Your inspirational words and feedback have me motivated and truly appreciative that I might have been able to convey my thoughts via this archaic language with a small sense of what I was trying to achieve.... I listened to Ancient Legend as I read it as well... thanks for that!... I let YouTube music play and Arkenstone really pulled me in with some of his songs..... carrying me away.... I love that, so.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, the generosity of your feedback, the list add and incorporating support and motivation into my day when I really needed to feel it.... I am so grateful for you 🙏🏻

Much love and respect,
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xo
B

I am guessing you enjoyed yourself, while writing this poem.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.  

I definitely tried to enjoy myself, yep! Thanks for the compliment, Francisco... you are too kind.
I appreciate your faithful readership.
🌹 - B

Bestill my heart, Lady love-- Your archaics have bade me to log in n leave adores all over!.. such a weak fancee of mine and im hoardin thisss away to my list♡

Firstly, of title-- so bold, so Perfect.. my turn to swoon, and mightily-- at the tasteful intelligence with which u weave ur words n meanings. i smile devious with the purity of you..

~~especially here:
"O'Ye hearts of thieving stardust" <~~ bang!

"precarious, thee skirt'd twattle" **smirk

and so much poetry sighing for ur end. This is a lovely display of ur beautiful mind at work.
much cali loves,
~d

"O'Ye hearts of thieving stardust"
Loved your approach to this. It reads like a timeless classic, written a hundred years ago, standing the test of time.
Excellent work Blue.

It was just a silly attempt.... I do appreciate you reading and for such kind sentiments, Walter!!

I always enjoy your feedback!
🌹 - 🦋
B