deepundergroundpoetry.com
My Shadow
Only the shadow is always everywhere
Strives to keep up with its loyalty,
and as an eternal friend
Lie down at my steps.
And to repeat my movements -
Her uncomplaining tribute,
Her fate, destiny,
An involuntarily chosen altar.
Wherever I went, wherever I was,
Looming somewhere in silence,
And flying like a black raven,
Draws an outline on the wall.
You do not know the palette,
Shades of black and gray,
Only the night in you is always hidden by
A moving dull canvas.
You only touch part of it
Me, sliding down,
But nevertheless, alas
I cannot have power over you
My dark companion, my traveler
A mute witness of dark days,
I'm sorry for your stingy fate
To be a shadow in the middle of darkness ...
Strives to keep up with its loyalty,
and as an eternal friend
Lie down at my steps.
And to repeat my movements -
Her uncomplaining tribute,
Her fate, destiny,
An involuntarily chosen altar.
Wherever I went, wherever I was,
Looming somewhere in silence,
And flying like a black raven,
Draws an outline on the wall.
You do not know the palette,
Shades of black and gray,
Only the night in you is always hidden by
A moving dull canvas.
You only touch part of it
Me, sliding down,
But nevertheless, alas
I cannot have power over you
My dark companion, my traveler
A mute witness of dark days,
I'm sorry for your stingy fate
To be a shadow in the middle of darkness ...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 14
reading list entries 8
comments 26
reads 547
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. My Shadow
11th Jun 2021 9:04pm
The 3rd stanza was so rich in visual and feeling and that last line is "drop the mic" status. Pretty wicked write Kris.
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
11th Jun 2021 9:22pm
Hey Lj! I am really happy that you got the imagery and feeling; and I especially love wicked write and "drop the mic" status. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. ;) xo
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
11th Jun 2021 9:20pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. My Shadow
11th Jun 2021 9:37pm
Even if we no longer see it maybe it keeps us company in the forever giving moment too. Otherwise we know it is waiting and will always return or that it's already there somewhere.
Re. My Shadow
11th Jun 2021 11:20pm
Re: Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 7:54pm
So true. But it always returns at some point in even the dimmest light. Thank you so much for the comment Ron. Love and light (for the shadows).
Re. My Shadow
12th Jun 2021 1:29am
Haunting and moody battle of self ....
Image is perfect with the feeling here
Deep offering
Not everyone can expose like this
Bravo Kx
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
Image is perfect with the feeling here
Deep offering
Not everyone can expose like this
Bravo Kx
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 7:57pm
I know that internal battle all to well. I am glad you like the image, I did too. ;) I am here to give you deep offerings and expose myself. * never mind * that sounded different in my head. lol As always, love the Big Like and thank you for the RL. :)
Re. My Shadow
12th Jun 2021 4:07am
Dear K,
I’m beginning to think being the shadow is way better than being the person. Seems like there’s so much less agony and dealing with life’s crap.
“ I cannot have power over you” I found this an interesting line of thought. As though a process of control can be gained over most things but the shadow always knows therefore power is obsolete. I really appreciated this piece for the reflective gems of thought it gave me. H🌷
I’m beginning to think being the shadow is way better than being the person. Seems like there’s so much less agony and dealing with life’s crap.
“ I cannot have power over you” I found this an interesting line of thought. As though a process of control can be gained over most things but the shadow always knows therefore power is obsolete. I really appreciated this piece for the reflective gems of thought it gave me. H🌷
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 8:07pm
Hey Honoria. I am really sorry you are feeling that way and I hope things get better. * Hugs * I can definitely relate to what you are saying. I have been pretty depressed because of things going on and it does feel like it would be easier to be a shadow. Much of the time I already feel like a shadow, just following movements and casting the reflection that I am 'supposed' to for everyone while trying to keep everything together.
Re. My Shadow
Re: Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 7:53pm
Ah yes! give it the slightest bit of light and it will be there in an instant to play with us. Liking this light hearted take on shadows. ;)
Re. My Shadow
12th Jun 2021 7:54pm
Shadows flee every night as Earth's shadow overpowers them to return with morning's light in the trillions...a very evocative piece of imagery ...well done...
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 7:53pm
They do always return to us no matter how often they flee into the darkness. :) Thank you so much for the comment Bc. I am really happy you liked the imagery and piece.
Re. My Shadow
12th Jun 2021 10:00pm
Dear Kristina,
Sorry I've been in the shadows of late. Things are much better now. I like this personification of shadows. I really like these two passages,
"A moving dull canvas."
And,
"A mute witness of dark days..."
Sorry I've been in the shadows of late. Things are much better now. I like this personification of shadows. I really like these two passages,
"A moving dull canvas."
And,
"A mute witness of dark days..."
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 7:50pm
Wherever you are, your light will no doubt give life to a beautiful shadow. It is always great to hear from you and I am so happy to hear things are much better now! Thank you so much for the comment and your thoughts.
Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 8:17pm
Without you, it doesn't exist.
Although it thrives in the dark, without light, it can not appear. : )
Is there a shadow contest? I've come across three recent poems on this topic.
Although it thrives in the dark, without light, it can not appear. : )
Is there a shadow contest? I've come across three recent poems on this topic.
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
13th Jun 2021 11:57pm
Then it has an incentive to keep me alive. ;)
We all need a little light, no matter how much we love the dark...
I am not aware of any contest but I am curious about these other poems on the topic because I do love the shadows and the dark. :)
We all need a little light, no matter how much we love the dark...
I am not aware of any contest but I am curious about these other poems on the topic because I do love the shadows and the dark. :)
Re. My Shadow
17th Jun 2021 9:15pm
"strives to keep up with its loyalty" ... poetic gold ... "An involuntarily chosen altar" ... this one arrested me ... truly ... had me snagged on it ...
shades of black and gray" ... nice deviation from cliche ... the last line is haunting ... great write my dear Kristina ... excellent rendering of one of my very favorite poetry themes ...
shades of black and gray" ... nice deviation from cliche ... the last line is haunting ... great write my dear Kristina ... excellent rendering of one of my very favorite poetry themes ...
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
18th Jun 2021 9:03pm
Hey LDF! Now that I know it is a favorite theme I may have to do another. ;) I love when you say poetic gold. "this one arrested me" - but were you in handcuffs? sounds sexy. ;) I think I often deviate from cliché (probably because I am weird). Thank you so much for the comment and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it and I am really glad you liked it.
Re. My Shadow
14th Jul 2021 10:37pm
Philosophical reasoning about a shadow in the middle of darkness. Great write.
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
14th Jul 2021 11:16pm
I do love the night, darkness, and shadows! Thank you for joining me in the shadows. I am really happy you liked it. Thank you so much for the comment.
Re. My Shadow
19th Jul 2021 00:46am
The last stanza is pretty haunting, like an echo of the past that only you can hear and feel.
Excellent write Kristina.
Excellent write Kristina.
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
20th Jul 2021 4:52pm
Exactly, you get me. ;) Thank you so much for the comment Wally. I am really happy you liked it.
Re. My Shadow
8th Aug 2022 8:18am
miss KX, my hope is that one day or night
your shadow will shadow mine
(dropping by still questing for waterfall)
your shadow will shadow mine
(dropping by still questing for waterfall)
0
Re: Re. My Shadow
8th Aug 2022 8:16pm
I am still wondering if you ever found the waterfall. lol ;) But I love how you are sharing your thoughts with me all along the path. Definitely some interesting things to pass through on the way. When shadows combine, that is a very interesting position to be in. So many incredible things happen in those moment.