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Thick and Smoldering
Between lovers
You understand the violence
There's no scars
Only heavy air
Thick and smoldering
You understand the violence
There's no scars
Only heavy air
Thick and smoldering
Published 11th Jun 2021
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
11th Jun 2021 2:43pm
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11th Jun 2021 2:48pm
Anonymous
11th Jun 2021 4:00pm
The violent sky held its breath, and in her eyes I found rest.
This is awesome. I swear I see a little bird. I took this to my reading list.
This is awesome. I swear I see a little bird. I took this to my reading list.
11th Jun 2021 7:12pm
11th Jun 2021 7:57pm
12th Jun 2021 2:14am
Staring love in its face
as it is tied to this place.
Time escapes running a race
to enjoy the sacred space.
as it is tied to this place.
Time escapes running a race
to enjoy the sacred space.
12th Jun 2021 2:21am
12th Jun 2021 2:20pm
12th Jun 2021 2:21pm
12th Jun 2021 5:55pm
This poem is classic PoetSpeak with a touch of reinvention. It’s fantastic.
As for the art, I love that shock of red, and if I am being absolutely truthful, I see a lot of vagina. My gutter mind can’t help it. What’s a girl to do 🤷🏻♀️
Xx
As for the art, I love that shock of red, and if I am being absolutely truthful, I see a lot of vagina. My gutter mind can’t help it. What’s a girl to do 🤷🏻♀️
Xx
12th Jun 2021 6:49pm
BIG LIKE your gutter mind
This is what I'm meant to be, artist and sex dog
Bark worse than bite
Most of the time
Thx E
❤
This is what I'm meant to be, artist and sex dog
Bark worse than bite
Most of the time
Thx E
❤
17th Jul 2021 3:42am
The image made me think of Jupiter's atmosphere, like it's thick and smoldering.
Nicely done sir.
Nicely done sir.
17th Jul 2021 4:21am
