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ODE TO THE COY LOVER
She had it
all going for her
but not the ability
to be open
and honest with
her desires for
romance and
sexual pleasure;
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
She listened and
read about the
amazing pleasures
of others, ached
for it herself, but
said no to others,
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
Sometimes she'd wake
in the middle of the night
and feel the wetness
that had escaped
from an erotic dream;
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
As the years slowly
claimed her youth
she still had the desire
but never ignited the fire
with another,
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
Oh, the call is to all
COY LOVERS to wake up...
and honor your birthright.
all going for her
but not the ability
to be open
and honest with
her desires for
romance and
sexual pleasure;
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
She listened and
read about the
amazing pleasures
of others, ached
for it herself, but
said no to others,
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
Sometimes she'd wake
in the middle of the night
and feel the wetness
that had escaped
from an erotic dream;
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
As the years slowly
claimed her youth
she still had the desire
but never ignited the fire
with another,
SHE WAS A COY LOVER.
Oh, the call is to all
COY LOVERS to wake up...
and honor your birthright.
Published 5th Jun 2021
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5th Jun 2021 2:58pm
Wow. This is amazing. Even reading it aloud sound great. Birthright? New way of looking at it. I enjoyed this sir. i hope there will be more like these.
5th Jun 2021 3:02pm
Beeeautiful Free Versing, Oral ✍
I've known a few of the "coy" kind … the word "frustrating" comes to mind, 'cause the more I tried, the less she replied, until in a snit, I simply downright quit, and you know something me fine friend, she was coy 'til the end. ; )
Lovely syntactic flow and imagery, foisted by keen metaphor and envious storytelling expertise.
How much more joy life could be, sans the coy, wouldn't you agree?
You really got me involved in this one … I really admire your penmanship!
Thank you ever-so sincerely for sharing this sensually stirring piece! ⁓ Richard 🍃
I've known a few of the "coy" kind … the word "frustrating" comes to mind, 'cause the more I tried, the less she replied, until in a snit, I simply downright quit, and you know something me fine friend, she was coy 'til the end. ; )
Lovely syntactic flow and imagery, foisted by keen metaphor and envious storytelling expertise.
How much more joy life could be, sans the coy, wouldn't you agree?
You really got me involved in this one … I really admire your penmanship!
Thank you ever-so sincerely for sharing this sensually stirring piece! ⁓ Richard 🍃
5th Jun 2021 4:44pm
Richards, thanks for this amazing gift; your comment inspired me to want to write better. Yes, even in our writing, identity, and desires we tend to fall into the coy "trap." Continue enjoying your positive day...write on my friend. Hugs and peace, oral
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5th Jun 2021 7:37pm
YES!! The times they are a-changing...we need to burst out, enjoy our dreams, desires, and explore the new horizons, today, not yesterday or tomorrow. UP is now.Hugs and peace, oral
