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Your Passion
it's the way you hold yourself
the words you write
in awe
in love
in moments like this
i pine
the words you write
in awe
in love
in moments like this
i pine
Author's Note
Another day in splendor
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Your Passion
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2021 10:58pm
This reminds me of these lyrics "Not really sure how to feel about it, something in the way you move. Makes me feel like I can't live without you. It takes me all the way"
Beautiful poem and awesome artwork. 🌺
Beautiful poem and awesome artwork. 🌺
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Re: Re. Your Passion
3rd Jun 2021 11:19pm
Thank you Red
You know music and how to piece together flow
Art comes naturally to me, I'm glad you like the painting, it's got some mood going ..
Appreciate
You know music and how to piece together flow
Art comes naturally to me, I'm glad you like the painting, it's got some mood going ..
Appreciate
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2021 11:01pm
Nice, Poetspeak.
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3rd Jun 2021 11:20pm
Re. Your Passion
4th Jun 2021 3:23am
Gorgeous. There's nothing more attractive than a person's passion...
❤
❤
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4th Jun 2021 3:32am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
4th Jun 2021 6:38am
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2021 8:34am
Simple and exquisite in its truth
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Re. Your Passion
4th Jun 2021 2:13pm
Dear PS,
Hot and way hot. I love these writes because they’re so kind. It’s the recognition of the everyday things that say love for me. I dig the closing line. Wonderful write. And I don’t want to forget the painting, its cheerful and happy like the poem. Lovely. H🌷
Hot and way hot. I love these writes because they’re so kind. It’s the recognition of the everyday things that say love for me. I dig the closing line. Wonderful write. And I don’t want to forget the painting, its cheerful and happy like the poem. Lovely. H🌷
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Re: Re. Your Passion
4th Jun 2021 2:19pm
Dear H
You do know how to make my morning great !!
Your comments are the holy grail although there's usually nothing holy about my poems ..
Nonetheless I thank you on art and writing comments
Means a lot to me dear woman
PS
😍
You do know how to make my morning great !!
Your comments are the holy grail although there's usually nothing holy about my poems ..
Nonetheless I thank you on art and writing comments
Means a lot to me dear woman
PS
😍
Re. Your Passion
4th Jun 2021 2:23pm
I very much like the way this interacts with my eyes and my perception
and my mind.
Very cool.
and my mind.
Very cool.
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4th Jun 2021 2:46pm
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Re. Your Passion
7th Jun 2021 10:07pm
I am in awe of the painting... the darkness captivates me, along with the blood splatter flower; it's beautiful. BIG LIKE.
and the love and longing is so evident in this... maybe that's why I see blood - yes... that's passion. ;)
and the love and longing is so evident in this... maybe that's why I see blood - yes... that's passion. ;)
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Re: Re. Your Passion
7th Jun 2021 10:16pm
Blood, passion and love all collide.
I can see your vision and it pleases me immensely....
Your comment is beautiful as are you ❤
Thank you
I can see your vision and it pleases me immensely....
Your comment is beautiful as are you ❤
Thank you
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
9th Jun 2021 12:22pm
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