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shameless.
Yours is constant
that drumbeat
of an incessant cacophony
always beating
always needing
When attention IS the apex—
to be spotlit
and of wanted shine
is purposed breath
meaning all,
and a point of
which lies become reality
Reaching out
with black hole hands
is a masquerade
of icy intent
Conscious to subconscious
universe to parallel
with mouths of spun woven
that attempt to permeate
truthful goodness
hits bone, in reckoning
a veracious heart
recognizes the discovery
of ruse to ruins,
harms that
are easily swallowed
and what's left
of this thing called shame
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Because when it's all said and done, all any of us has is our integrity..... thoughts, after a few long, hard days....
Because when it's all said and done, all any of us has is our integrity..... thoughts, after a few long, hard days....
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Re. shameless.
I will always treat you and everyone here with Kindness and Respect. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re. shameless.
3rd Jun 2021 8:56am
I'm a firm believer of if you have nothing nice to say, say nothing
Manners cost nothing and honesty is everything. I know there's people who play the two faced game but leather haters hate beautiful always be you, honesty, integrity will always rise to the surface
Love and light
Ron xx
Manners cost nothing and honesty is everything. I know there's people who play the two faced game but leather haters hate beautiful always be you, honesty, integrity will always rise to the surface
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re. shameless.
3rd Jun 2021 11:48pm
There be poison on that spearhead....! Wouldn't want to be on the receiving end.
Hope you all patched things up. If not, incapacitate and then move on! : )
Hope you all patched things up. If not, incapacitate and then move on! : )
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Re: Re. shameless.
I'm far too submissive and nice to write publicly with such distaste @ one individual, Leo .... This is a generalization of all that I find unsavory and horrid in particular actions that I've noticed of those either @ work, personally or as acquaintances....it's a purge write, my lovely friend... sometimes venting is therapeutic!
You are very clever and correct when you say incapacitate and move on!...Yep!... Ty for shining the light on my impetus... I'm glad to have a chance to set it straight :)
I love your visits, my friend... don't be a stranger!
🌹-💙
B
You are very clever and correct when you say incapacitate and move on!...Yep!... Ty for shining the light on my impetus... I'm glad to have a chance to set it straight :)
I love your visits, my friend... don't be a stranger!
🌹-💙
B
Re. shameless.
4th Jun 2021 3:16am
without integrity
we are nothing... true!
but beating self up
is bad...you know!
we are nothing... true!
but beating self up
is bad...you know!
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Re: Re. shameless.
Agreed! :)
I'm trying to get it out instead of internalizing!!!
It's a bad habit that I'm trying to break... Work in progress, I am
Thanks for the remind... it's useful and very much appreciated, cf 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
I'm trying to get it out instead of internalizing!!!
It's a bad habit that I'm trying to break... Work in progress, I am
Thanks for the remind... it's useful and very much appreciated, cf 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Re. shameless.
4th Jun 2021 3:46am
Dear BV,
Ugh! Human behavior is the worst, except mine. Naturally. (Totally fibbing). I hate when I’m a pill and then have to apologize for rudeness. I’m like why couldn’t I have just glossed over my petty annoyance and killer smiled my way through it?
Lies, deceit and thoughtless behavior on the other hand deserve an outright hex and I have spells for that.. (no, I really don’t. But I’d really like them)
It’s great you write out these toxic emotions because I would bet my last farthing those who cause the problems don’t give your feelings a second thought. Ooooo so maddening!
If it’s any consolation, I think this poem shows style and elegance in response to classless and vulgar manners and your thoughtfulness will always win the day. Lovely write on a frustrating emotion. H🌷
Ugh! Human behavior is the worst, except mine. Naturally. (Totally fibbing). I hate when I’m a pill and then have to apologize for rudeness. I’m like why couldn’t I have just glossed over my petty annoyance and killer smiled my way through it?
Lies, deceit and thoughtless behavior on the other hand deserve an outright hex and I have spells for that.. (no, I really don’t. But I’d really like them)
It’s great you write out these toxic emotions because I would bet my last farthing those who cause the problems don’t give your feelings a second thought. Ooooo so maddening!
If it’s any consolation, I think this poem shows style and elegance in response to classless and vulgar manners and your thoughtfulness will always win the day. Lovely write on a frustrating emotion. H🌷
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Re: Re. shameless.
Dear H,
i was hoping you would read this piece because of anyone, your thoughts normally run in close comparison to my own and I wanted to pick your brain. I was wondering to myself, if I was too impertinent with this piece? (ultimately I decided not to care because it's about cleansing my icky ugly stuff)... but after reading your feedback I feel better about how I decided to write this crap out of my head /psyche.
I too, hate to apologize for my bad behavior.... it's never fun, yet I've learned that everyone (YES everyone) behaves badly @ some point and it's those people who do step up to the plate and take responsibility, those are the ones you keep around...
I'd definitely like hex options that you could one-click buy, like on Amazon.... hahaha... Yes, please!! 🙋🏻♀️....
Your own kindness and eloquence in your remarks, have me smiling huge and thinking that karma is hopefully taking notes. Eventually, I hope that the 'goes around' part will catch up to those that truly deserve it.
Thank you for everything, Honoria
I appreciate you more than I can convey!
🌹-💙
xo
B
i was hoping you would read this piece because of anyone, your thoughts normally run in close comparison to my own and I wanted to pick your brain. I was wondering to myself, if I was too impertinent with this piece? (ultimately I decided not to care because it's about cleansing my icky ugly stuff)... but after reading your feedback I feel better about how I decided to write this crap out of my head /psyche.
I too, hate to apologize for my bad behavior.... it's never fun, yet I've learned that everyone (YES everyone) behaves badly @ some point and it's those people who do step up to the plate and take responsibility, those are the ones you keep around...
I'd definitely like hex options that you could one-click buy, like on Amazon.... hahaha... Yes, please!! 🙋🏻♀️....
Your own kindness and eloquence in your remarks, have me smiling huge and thinking that karma is hopefully taking notes. Eventually, I hope that the 'goes around' part will catch up to those that truly deserve it.
Thank you for everything, Honoria
I appreciate you more than I can convey!
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. shameless.
7th Jun 2021 9:09am
first thought- Ohhhh you purge it sooo well! ;)
and that metaphoric swallow?~~ yea, u spanked it!
I am thoroughly enjoying the polarity u nail so icysweet in verbage here, beautiful B.. effective honesty, that. ive been ranting internally on the peoplesukk syndrome for years[lol] and this just puts it out there for "those uns".. *You, on the other hand, are a shinee soul if ever ive read one, and those are the rare ones i shall always want close to my heart. Outstanding piece!
much lovins lady, all the way frm Cali.. u demand urself a sweeter day Soon♡
~d
and that metaphoric swallow?~~ yea, u spanked it!
I am thoroughly enjoying the polarity u nail so icysweet in verbage here, beautiful B.. effective honesty, that. ive been ranting internally on the peoplesukk syndrome for years[lol] and this just puts it out there for "those uns".. *You, on the other hand, are a shinee soul if ever ive read one, and those are the rare ones i shall always want close to my heart. Outstanding piece!
much lovins lady, all the way frm Cali.. u demand urself a sweeter day Soon♡
~d
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Re. shameless.
12th Jun 2021 4:09am
You write your integrity with grit and raw eloquence. There is real honesty here that breaches the hull of dishonesty with magnificent truth. Love how you took me into the heart of dignity and what it means to stand up for yourself. This is as real as the rising sun.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. shameless.
12th Jun 2021 10:58am
Wow what a write!
I really enjoyed.
Black hole hands..I love that.
This whole stanza is passionate and great.
Conscious to subconscious
universe to parallel
with mouths of spun woven
that attempt to permeate
truthful goodness
hits bone, in reckoning
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Re: Re. shameless.
13th Jun 2021 3:25am
Hey there William :)
I'm so very appreciative of you for taking the time to leave your thoughts and especially for pinpointing lines that resonated... It means a lot to me and I'm all smiles that you enjoyed reading this as much as you did.
Much thanks, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
Always a pleasure seeing you 🦋.
B
I'm so very appreciative of you for taking the time to leave your thoughts and especially for pinpointing lines that resonated... It means a lot to me and I'm all smiles that you enjoyed reading this as much as you did.
Much thanks, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
Always a pleasure seeing you 🦋.
B
Re. shameless.
13th Jul 2021 7:52pm
Perhaps it's the drummer in me that drew me in that first stanza.
One of the lines that stood out for me was "which lies become reality" as I've written something similar. It's as if the universe creates what some conjure up (to a certain degree of course).
Very nice verse Blue.
One of the lines that stood out for me was "which lies become reality" as I've written something similar. It's as if the universe creates what some conjure up (to a certain degree of course).
Very nice verse Blue.
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Re: Re. shameless.
13th Jul 2021 10:00pm
Thanks for reading Wally!
I appreciate the thoughts and all the wonderful sentiments you have leave for me to ponder... I am so fortunate to have that window through which I can have an alternate view....
Valued perspective!!
🌹 - 💙
B
I appreciate the thoughts and all the wonderful sentiments you have leave for me to ponder... I am so fortunate to have that window through which I can have an alternate view....
Valued perspective!!
🌹 - 💙
B