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YOU'VE GOT WHAT I WANT
SECRET
I tried to
keep it a secret,
being coy most
of the time,
talking in circles
and hiding in riddles;
BUT
I'm sure the
lust in my
eyes and voice
gave me away.
It was magnificent,
so arrayed in beauty,
one of a kind;
sought and desired
by others.
YES
you got what
I want. That new
Rolex watch that
reminds me of the
times...do you remember?
How about new times?
I tried to
keep it a secret,
being coy most
of the time,
talking in circles
and hiding in riddles;
BUT
I'm sure the
lust in my
eyes and voice
gave me away.
It was magnificent,
so arrayed in beauty,
one of a kind;
sought and desired
by others.
YES
you got what
I want. That new
Rolex watch that
reminds me of the
times...do you remember?
How about new times?
Published 2nd Jun 2021
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2nd Jun 2021 10:58pm
I like what you did here, the comparison wrapped in a meta, and yes I guess we all look back from time to time and wonder what might have happened if we had turned left instead of right. If only we had the time again or as you say making new time with an old watch. Very much enjoyed. Best R
2nd Jun 2021 11:00pm
R, thanks for your gracious comment, I cherish it. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs and peace, oral
3rd Jun 2021 9:03am
