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Numbers Don't Lie
Unfair
of one, t(w)o tell
a third party my truth!
Fo(u)r it was mine to share or keep.
Envy
hi fived jealousy six times!
Breaking the seven seals
of intense love.
The end
of one, t(w)o tell
a third party my truth!
Fo(u)r it was mine to share or keep.
Envy
hi fived jealousy six times!
Breaking the seven seals
of intense love.
The end
Published 25th May 2021
| Edited 1st Jun 2021
Author's Note
A day in the life of grasping one's feelings, embracing the feeling, accepting all that comes with the feeling, living that feeling and expressing the feeling in the healthiest way possible... Thus I write!!
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31st May 2021 9:02pm
Short but dynamic communication. The joy of freedom is amazing. Hugs and peace, oral
1st Jun 2021 2:02pm
Greetings,
Thanks for taking time to experience my thoughts!! When you say "freedom" is amazing, it made me ponder the piece differently. Thanks for your perspective!!
Thanks for taking time to experience my thoughts!! When you say "freedom" is amazing, it made me ponder the piece differently. Thanks for your perspective!!
1st Jun 2021 2:21pm
2nd Jun 2021 2:39pm
2nd Jun 2021 2:42pm
Thanks for sharing a "new" word with me. Have a great writing day. Hugs and peace, oral
2nd Jun 2021 2:48pm
"New" word... You are welcome! What's your moon sign, if you don't mind my asking?? I see you are a Cancer sun sign...
2nd Jun 2021 2:55pm
Thanks for asking. I'm not sure what my moon sign is. I haven't given as much attention to astrology as I should. You? Hugs and peace, oral
2nd Jun 2021 2:58pm
2nd Jun 2021 3:29pm
Greetings,
Thanks for viewing and commenting on the piece. Been a little while since we have communicated. Hope all is well and your writing has become even more dynamic!!
Oh and thanks for the kind words... the piece was inspired by a very unpleasant moment...
Thanks for viewing and commenting on the piece. Been a little while since we have communicated. Hope all is well and your writing has become even more dynamic!!
Oh and thanks for the kind words... the piece was inspired by a very unpleasant moment...
21st Sep 2021 1:08am
No one likes being the subject of gossip
And a broken confidence hurts even more than an oft-repeated lie
And a broken confidence hurts even more than an oft-repeated lie
26th Sep 2021 1:52pm
You said a mouth's full with "broken confidence hurts even more than an oft-repeated lie"
I wish that one line was the actual piece because you summed up its essence so clear and concisely... Thanks for taking the time to visit my world and share your kind opinions!!!
I wish that one line was the actual piece because you summed up its essence so clear and concisely... Thanks for taking the time to visit my world and share your kind opinions!!!
25th Sep 2022 6:15am
Intriguing write, looking inward and analyzing how we feel and making sense of things.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
