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High School Dropout (Butterfly Cinquain)
Sitting
across; looking
at school. Nothing is taught.
Transformation not an option.
Conform
to all marginalization.
Never knowing thyself,
makes ignorance,
not, bliss.
Published 14th May 2021
| Edited 21st May 2021
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Anonymous
14th May 2021 11:04pm
Really well articulated in your 42 syllables
Terrific read.
🌹
-B
Terrific read.
🌹
-B
Greetings,
Thanks for taking the time to read the piece. I was trying my hand at the Butterfly format... Not one for following the rules of writing, but ever so often I accept the challenge.. Again thanks!!
Thanks for taking the time to read the piece. I was trying my hand at the Butterfly format... Not one for following the rules of writing, but ever so often I accept the challenge.. Again thanks!!
16th Jun 2023 5:40pm
Greetings,
It has been a while since I last checked in. Thanks so much for your feedback. It is encouraging to say the most. Until the next upload...Be well...spoken... Lol!!
It has been a while since I last checked in. Thanks so much for your feedback. It is encouraging to say the most. Until the next upload...Be well...spoken... Lol!!
25th Sep 2022 6:24am
"Conform
to all marginalization."
It's a pretty scary thought that we're taught to conform, especially when minds are so young.
Well penned.
to all marginalization."
It's a pretty scary thought that we're taught to conform, especially when minds are so young.
Well penned.
