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To be sparked of wickedness
Imagination bordering
a dreamy cusp of reality
I linger here,
within this space
gliding from wonderment
along twisted and winding paths
of unyet tapped inspiration
These, my sharp tallens—
soaked and bloody
covered in dripping bare truth
conspire with tired withered bones
untouched by whatever it was
that once was called enlightenment
yet now, punctuate
in ache
in longing
in yearning
for that which was
thought forgotten
dances a flickering
along with whimsies
of compassion
empathy or desire
or p'raps just the possibility of
knowledge that is surrounding
and that penetrates doubt
as breath
after
breath
catches in such
a wicked chest
as mine.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
My #Nopoo from yesterday.
musings of truth.
My #Nopoo from yesterday.
musings of truth.
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Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 1:43am
That graphic is super tight and adds to this piece. It reminds us of something but we can remember what right now. But the darkness of both is really hands in hands, tight work Lady
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
Love the pic too... right up my alley. Glad you enjoyed it and the piece, my friend
Always a pleasure to get a 'tight'
🌹-💙
xo
B
Always a pleasure to get a 'tight'
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
Anonymous
22nd May 2021 2:08am
Let not the Dark come to you, their is no wickedness in you boo. Know that too
Written. M.
Written. M.
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 8:09am
Ohhh we all have a bit of darkness, methinks...
Sometimes it's important to embrace.... Ty for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, it's much appreciated!
🌹
B
Sometimes it's important to embrace.... Ty for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, it's much appreciated!
🌹
B
Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
Anonymous
22nd May 2021 8:35am
While it is possible that all have some sense of darkness, it is considerable how that darkness befits us; and how we relate to it in what sense of care; If in fact it overtakes us, it is like an eating disorder that is beyond the normal or healthy norm. So we must decline it at that point rather then subject that we all have darkness in ourselves which is true; but to what hue?
How great is that darkness; the Light of the body is the eye; it is upon the beholders that we set it's measure of reign. My Post was upon the muse/ing of truth, at when at healthy their is no interjection. But a Consideration and Care. With this I Simple Said you Matter; hence boo; Don't let it overtake you!..
With Care.
Martin
How great is that darkness; the Light of the body is the eye; it is upon the beholders that we set it's measure of reign. My Post was upon the muse/ing of truth, at when at healthy their is no interjection. But a Consideration and Care. With this I Simple Said you Matter; hence boo; Don't let it overtake you!..
With Care.
Martin
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 8:38am
I agree about not being overtaken,sure .... You're correct... and like most things in life, it's about balance.... that's the key, in my opinion.
🌹
I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts ✨
In kindness,
B.
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I thank you so much for sharing your thoughts ✨
In kindness,
B.
Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd May 2021 9:03am
22nd May 2021 8:43am
I Should have said, Writing outloud; because you know all of this, Just had a thought you might have forgotten it for a minute and didn't wanted you to go into that darkness for a moment. But perchance it is good for u to face our inner demons. So Balance are the only thing mattering. Your fully true; Had it in you. :)
Thanks for the Conversation..
w/L
M.
"Just some musing and yes, probably purging a little bit of my dark angst. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the line choices you selected. I sometimes just need to follow my emotions where they lead..... without too much analysis." WISE Words
Cheers Blue
Thanks for the Conversation..
w/L
M.
"Just some musing and yes, probably purging a little bit of my dark angst. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the line choices you selected. I sometimes just need to follow my emotions where they lead..... without too much analysis." WISE Words
Cheers Blue
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Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 2:10am
The darkness inside you turns me on. Keep on writing you beautiful strong sexy woman.
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 4:10am
Hahaha...you make me laugh, Francisco.... my darkness is always there my friend.
Appreciate you
🌹
Appreciate you
🌹
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 2:19am
And the baring of buried truth is often painful
Nice metaphor with the bloody tallens
Could be from digging into the raw meat of the matter
Or from digging so hard that the hands become battered and torn
Very nice and thought provoking
Nice metaphor with the bloody tallens
Could be from digging into the raw meat of the matter
Or from digging so hard that the hands become battered and torn
Very nice and thought provoking
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 7:56am
A really awesome summation of my metaphoric use, FB. I appreciate the thoughtful comments and the generosity of your sentiments left. I am so grateful for your visit and I'm glad you had a ponder, due to my little offering....
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-B
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-B
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 4:46am
Hey, ask Zazzles, that's not what Wicked means! LOL!
I have enough trouble understanding day to day reality let alone an alternate dark reality. So now I sit here with my garlic necklace, shiny crucifix, sipping on red wine. Wicked blue, can I handle her truth? : )
I have enough trouble understanding day to day reality let alone an alternate dark reality. So now I sit here with my garlic necklace, shiny crucifix, sipping on red wine. Wicked blue, can I handle her truth? : )
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 8:07am
hahaha 😂...
I know I know!!! Lol.
But for this instance.... it's gotta be...
Handling my truth remains to be seen... gotta keep a sense of mystery... eh?
lol
I know I know!!! Lol.
But for this instance.... it's gotta be...
Handling my truth remains to be seen... gotta keep a sense of mystery... eh?
lol
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
Dear, Baby Bunny,
Are you letting loose your wicked side? I'm not sure I can handle that😈 This passage struck me most,
"untouched by whatever it was
that once was called enlightenment
yet now, punctuate
in ache"
I understand and empathize with how the ache of pain can change one's perspective.
Powerful piece my 🌹🐻💞🐰
Are you letting loose your wicked side? I'm not sure I can handle that😈 This passage struck me most,
"untouched by whatever it was
that once was called enlightenment
yet now, punctuate
in ache"
I understand and empathize with how the ache of pain can change one's perspective.
Powerful piece my 🌹🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 8:15am
Just some musing and yes, probably purging a little bit of my dark angst. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the line choices you selected. I sometimes just need to follow my emotions where they lead..... without too much analysis.
Letting the outpouring be it's catharsis all it's own.
Your visit is always a highlight, BB
Ty so much.
🌹-💙
xoxo
B
Letting the outpouring be it's catharsis all it's own.
Your visit is always a highlight, BB
Ty so much.
🌹-💙
xoxo
B
Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 5:51pm
I am a a champion of over analysis and making up stories from imperfect data.
BTW, you REALLY need to cut your nails 😍🐻💞
BTW, you REALLY need to cut your nails 😍🐻💞
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Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 8:12am
Ooh you wicked gorgeous lady, this needs you to read it. I miss your spoken word( and accent)
Great write, awesome read but needs Your touch
Love and light
Ron x
Great write, awesome read but needs Your touch
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 8:35am
I was thinking about recording, I might!
So glad you enjoyed reading and your comments made me smile from ear to ear.
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B
So glad you enjoyed reading and your comments made me smile from ear to ear.
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
22nd May 2021 3:59pm
Dear BV,
I have a spell that can work for this...for only $19.95 it’s yours...
Although let the wickedness rein I say. It’s more fun in the end I’m learning. Cool write as per. H🌷
I have a spell that can work for this...for only $19.95 it’s yours...
Although let the wickedness rein I say. It’s more fun in the end I’m learning. Cool write as per. H🌷
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
23rd May 2021 6:00pm
Hey there, Honoria
I'll totally remember that spell availability, indeed! ✨ 💫 ✨.... 👌🏻
Sometimes the dark needs and requires it's due.
Thanks for reading and seeing that. Always a pleasure to have your thoughts on my page..
🌹-💙
xo
B
I'll totally remember that spell availability, indeed! ✨ 💫 ✨.... 👌🏻
Sometimes the dark needs and requires it's due.
Thanks for reading and seeing that. Always a pleasure to have your thoughts on my page..
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
23rd May 2021 4:37am
An angel, if given free will, would be the embodiment of this poem. You've just charted a path between light and dark, most people just put one foot in front of another but you are dancing on the path you've created. Still forgetting to breath until the poem is over. There is a poem in this reply, mind if I borrow you as a muse for an evening?
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
23rd May 2021 5:23pm
Wow... what a comment!
I'm grateful for your thoughtful comments and any inspiration you may have derived, is so very awesome!
Thanks for stopping by to read, you're always welcome.
🌹 - 💙
B
I'm grateful for your thoughtful comments and any inspiration you may have derived, is so very awesome!
Thanks for stopping by to read, you're always welcome.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
Anonymous
23rd May 2021 6:11pm
I've gone past dark to mute despair presently. Dark is so much more fun. Your dark is beautiful to me.
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
23rd May 2021 6:36pm
I feel you deeply, in that despair, my lovely Rachel.
It's permeating for me too, most recently...
I adore your comment...
and likewise
🖤 🥀 🖤
💙♠
xoxo
It's permeating for me too, most recently...
I adore your comment...
and likewise
🖤 🥀 🖤
💙♠
xoxo
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
23rd May 2021 7:39pm
By the pricking of my thumbs, something wicked this way comes ... nice dark write B ... great stanza variation ... large stanzas at the beginning to set the stage ... then shorter ones to carry the poem's momentum ... vivid imagery ... full of plump ... bleeding words ... love it ....
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
23rd May 2021 9:41pm
Thank you, LilD.
Really really appreciate that wonderful feedback. It's always so terrific to reflect upon your thoughts and apply that my knowledge base that you've been kind enough to thoughtfully add to. Invaluable, I believe!! I extend my gratitude for that, for the list add and all your supportiveness.
Lovely seeing you, my dear poetess 🦋
🌹-💙
xo B
Really really appreciate that wonderful feedback. It's always so terrific to reflect upon your thoughts and apply that my knowledge base that you've been kind enough to thoughtfully add to. Invaluable, I believe!! I extend my gratitude for that, for the list add and all your supportiveness.
Lovely seeing you, my dear poetess 🦋
🌹-💙
xo B
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
24th May 2021 3:38pm
The darkness is often where creativity originates. It festers and smolders there until we tap into it. Thank you for finding and expressing that ‘dark angst’!
❣️🙏
❣️🙏
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
24th May 2021 4:19pm
Thanks for reading, KP. I agree with you, that some much needed purging of the deepest depths of darkness provides some of the best art.... IMO, it's some of my favorite types .. I am all smiles that you enjoyed my little delve... Thanks for the lovely kind words and the list add.
🌹-💙
B
🌹-💙
B
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
26th May 2021 3:57am
Shades of dark and light bathed in joy from a heart whose wickedness is incorrigible and is a delight to behold. Love your more serious side especially when tinged with that wicked humor. You have it going, girl.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. To be sparked of wickedness
27th May 2021 4:26am
I truly try to have it going on.. lol .... Some days, more than others... I access the dark when I feel it bubbling inside... I appreciate your sentiments, John.
Ty for everything my lovely friend, it means a lot to me!
🌹
xo
S
Ty for everything my lovely friend, it means a lot to me!
🌹
xo
S
Re. To be sparked of wickedness
9th Jul 2021 11:56pm
Scary, exciting and seductive. I love how you're able to intrigue us with these aspects while leaving us (or at least me) yearning for more.
Well done.
Well done.
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