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The Mechanics of Blushing 101
a tight chest aches
arms and legs weaken
mind blanks,
numbed into a stupor
mouth goes impossibly dry
as a tongue lays limp, useless
and surely covered
in every single grain of sand (ever)
skin burns to temperatures uncharted
while moistening in brutal flop sweat
from the head to toe
lungs refuse to obey
their function of automatic
eyesight flashes a warning
a prompt to try and recover
to garner a semblance of control
forcing a traitorous body
quickly back to a more human color
and sheepishly hoping
... that no one caught it
Author's Note
https://media.giphy.com/media/rpf0Du8NasK6Q/giphy.gif
deep beet red, too... (unfortunately)
©Blu2021
Yesterday's #Nopoo.... just a little embarrassing musing....😳
deep beet red, too... (unfortunately)
©Blu2021
Yesterday's #Nopoo.... just a little embarrassing musing....😳
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Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 4:39am
Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 4:48am
😳☺️
hahaha.... You caught me!
Ty for reading and your funny and kind comments, Tim... Appreciate the list add and I'm glad you like liked it!
Enjoy your night, my friend.
🌹 -B
hahaha.... You caught me!
Ty for reading and your funny and kind comments, Tim... Appreciate the list add and I'm glad you like liked it!
Enjoy your night, my friend.
🌹 -B
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 5:15am
Well...with this one..this
crisp articulation, the snap
of 'that' moment...
We ALL can see 😁...
job BV.
crisp articulation, the snap
of 'that' moment...
We ALL can see 😁...
job BV.
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Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 6:08am
Nailed it...not that I'm ever embarrasses about anything...I've heard tell🤠 I chuckled at this,
"in every single grain of sand (ever) " It's the ever that got me you witty goddess you🐻💞🐰
"in every single grain of sand (ever) " It's the ever that got me you witty goddess you🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
I knew you'd like that too!!
hahaha 😂
😁☺️
Ohhh c'mon cowboy 🤠.. just a tingle of redness?? Of course.... ha!
I appreciate you reading and the very very generous list add for this silly embarrassment! ... 😳 (see what I did there?) lol....
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
hahaha 😂
😁☺️
Ohhh c'mon cowboy 🤠.. just a tingle of redness?? Of course.... ha!
I appreciate you reading and the very very generous list add for this silly embarrassment! ... 😳 (see what I did there?) lol....
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 6:13am
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 6:20am
Don't think that we're going awol but this could describe a great masturbation also. Thias is just the type tight that it can be about multiple events. Super tight Boo
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 6:25am
I totally thought the same!!! ...haha 😂... but wanted to see if anyone else felt similar.... Nicely stated, Me ... I appreciate the read and your very poignant thoughts! haha 😏..... astute!
🌹-💙
xo
B
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 6:38am
Well blushing ua just a roych of iñocence that makes you sll the more cute
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 5:25pm
Cute , he says...
Dawwww... I thank you so much for that, my lovely friend. Your comments and list add always make me smile ☺ (even if I'm beet red!)
🌹-💙
xo
B
Dawwww... I thank you so much for that, my lovely friend. Your comments and list add always make me smile ☺ (even if I'm beet red!)
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
Anonymous
21st May 2021 8:09am
Hehehe we've all been there !! ;-) Enjoyed reading your poem, thanks x
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:38pm
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts! All smiles you enjoyed it and I'm so very grateful for the generous list add.
Regards,
🌹-💙
B
Regards,
🌹-💙
B
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:39am
You paint a very vivid picture,
Never even missed a single detail...
The beauty of it all captured in words...
Hope these words keep you blushing
Never even missed a single detail...
The beauty of it all captured in words...
Hope these words keep you blushing
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:44pm
I adored your comments... Ty so much for sharing them with me..... and yes, I can feel the flush...
Always a pleasure,
🌹-B
💙
Always a pleasure,
🌹-B
💙
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 11:37am
That's so cute, absolutely lived this gorgeous
I hope you blush at least once a day lol
Love and light
Rob x
I hope you blush at least once a day lol
Love and light
Rob x
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:46pm
Hee hee hee hee hee🤗🤭😳☺
Ty for your extremely kind remarks.. I'm sure I get pink several times m.. hahaha... my heart sings that you enjoyed reading and found some cuteness... Thank you for the generous list add and all your loveliness.
Much love,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Ty for your extremely kind remarks.. I'm sure I get pink several times m.. hahaha... my heart sings that you enjoyed reading and found some cuteness... Thank you for the generous list add and all your loveliness.
Much love,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 5:47pm
Was he hot, LOL. Go after what you want. Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:55pm
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 6:19pm
Dear BV,
Oh thank god! It was only blushing. I thought I was having a heart attack! It’s been so long since I recall blushing these exact descriptions had to be put back in their rightful boxes of recognition. Fun write and no I didn’t see you flop sweating and gasping for air at all. You covered it very graciously.🥵
H🌷
Oh thank god! It was only blushing. I thought I was having a heart attack! It’s been so long since I recall blushing these exact descriptions had to be put back in their rightful boxes of recognition. Fun write and no I didn’t see you flop sweating and gasping for air at all. You covered it very graciously.🥵
H🌷
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:54pm
Ohh thank goodness that I was able to cover! ...
heh heh heh.. ☺️😳🤭🤗.... As always your comments have me giggling and breathing a chuckle filled sigh of much needed levity today... Thanks, H. I am so grateful for your support and awesome remarks.
I appreciate the list add and all your loveliness.
Stay cool 😎.
🌹-💙
xo
B
heh heh heh.. ☺️😳🤭🤗.... As always your comments have me giggling and breathing a chuckle filled sigh of much needed levity today... Thanks, H. I am so grateful for your support and awesome remarks.
I appreciate the list add and all your loveliness.
Stay cool 😎.
🌹-💙
xo
B
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21st May 2021 7:11pm
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:42pm
Thank you so much for that, Tim
I am sincerely grateful for all your support and encouragement. My wide smile is in appreciation of the generous list add and the time you take to leave comments while be real and truthful within your time here on DU. Not all are as genuine.
All my warmest regards and thanks,
🌹-💙
xoxo
-B
I am sincerely grateful for all your support and encouragement. My wide smile is in appreciation of the generous list add and the time you take to leave comments while be real and truthful within your time here on DU. Not all are as genuine.
All my warmest regards and thanks,
🌹-💙
xoxo
-B
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
21st May 2021 8:45pm
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Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 8:57pm
Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 9:00pm
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
Anonymous
21st May 2021 9:23pm
Their is not much i can say Here except; Who caused you to blush? 😊
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Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
21st May 2021 11:45pm
Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
22nd May 2021 3:16am
yeah... maybe a tinge.... hahaha 😈 😇
Nice seeing you, Kieron 🦋
I hope you enjoyed reading, and are doing well on your end.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹
-💙
B
Nice seeing you, Kieron 🦋
I hope you enjoyed reading, and are doing well on your end.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹
-💙
B
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
26th May 2021 3:54am
I thoroughly enjoyed this both for the emotions of the involuntary reaction and the riotous humor. You really took me into the heart of the blush and did it with artistry. Love how you made me feel the blush in all its majesty.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
4th Jun 2021 7:58pm
WOW, I do have what to learn about means of wording and expression from you. Where do you get all these from??
So picturesque and descriptive, that's what I aspire to achieve, to create a 'drawing' with words, but usually It's more explanatory with me. XD
So picturesque and descriptive, that's what I aspire to achieve, to create a 'drawing' with words, but usually It's more explanatory with me. XD
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
4th Jun 2021 8:08pm
Ohh, your words paint, Boyana!
They not only paint, they transport. THAT'S the realness and reality of where you take your readers... to other planes of existence and thought. I might paint a pretty picture.... but your capabilities of grabbing ahold and carrying hearts, minds and souls into other realms, is of magic and sheer talented beauty.
I thank you, from the bottom of my heart for your kindnesses here on my varied pieces... am so surprised and highly appreciative 🙏🏻
I really truly, humbly thank you for taking the time, dear poetess.
🌹-💙
B
They not only paint, they transport. THAT'S the realness and reality of where you take your readers... to other planes of existence and thought. I might paint a pretty picture.... but your capabilities of grabbing ahold and carrying hearts, minds and souls into other realms, is of magic and sheer talented beauty.
I thank you, from the bottom of my heart for your kindnesses here on my varied pieces... am so surprised and highly appreciative 🙏🏻
I really truly, humbly thank you for taking the time, dear poetess.
🌹-💙
B
Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
4th Jun 2021 8:10pm
of course I read your writings, they are very beautiul and rich :)
well yeah, other realms of existance are my usual residence... sometimes, even difficult to get back to my daily routine... :D
well yeah, other realms of existance are my usual residence... sometimes, even difficult to get back to my daily routine... :D
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
4th Jun 2021 8:54pm
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
6th Jun 2021 9:04am
never thought a poem about a blush would bring to mind being in the desert, even The Police's "Tea In The Sahara". Also speculation as to the cause
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Re: Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
6th Jun 2021 1:45pm
Hey there JM, :)
lol.... that's a good point. Not sure it's a good or bad thing.... ha!
My experience though, when I turn red that's pretty much what I feel.... I can't remember the particular circumstances of this blush, but it's more common than not (me blushing) I don't have control over it, it just happens!! No hiding my feelings, that's for sure!
I appreciate you stopping by leaving your thoughts, it's always nice to hear from you 🦋
🌹
B
lol.... that's a good point. Not sure it's a good or bad thing.... ha!
My experience though, when I turn red that's pretty much what I feel.... I can't remember the particular circumstances of this blush, but it's more common than not (me blushing) I don't have control over it, it just happens!! No hiding my feelings, that's for sure!
I appreciate you stopping by leaving your thoughts, it's always nice to hear from you 🦋
🌹
B
Re. The Mechanics of Blushing 101
9th Jul 2021 4:20pm
Amazing, simply amazing.
It's really interesting to catch oneself feeling it, knowing it and liking it.
Wonderful verse Blue.
It's really interesting to catch oneself feeling it, knowing it and liking it.
Wonderful verse Blue.
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