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My lonely Valentine
A card with a heart
drawn in red colour pencil
an arrow through it
and a little scribble
saying 'I love you'
laying on a park bench
with a stone to weigh it down
I look around
no one's to be found
I looked again
and I saw the tiny words
written on top
'who ever finds this,
I love you.'
Ah...another as lonely as I.
drawn in red colour pencil
an arrow through it
and a little scribble
saying 'I love you'
laying on a park bench
with a stone to weigh it down
I look around
no one's to be found
I looked again
and I saw the tiny words
written on top
'who ever finds this,
I love you.'
Ah...another as lonely as I.
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19th Feb 2012 12:34pm
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19th Feb 2012 1:01pm
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Its a true story but told by someone else: not my personal experience. Thank you for reading and commenting.
just a day....
19th Feb 2012 3:27pm
whats the big deal about valentines day
on april 9th why cant people act the same way
i just find it so very funny
because its a way to exploit your Love for money....lol
on april 9th why cant people act the same way
i just find it so very funny
because its a way to exploit your Love for money....lol
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re: just a day....
19th Feb 2012 3:58pm
Yes, You are right Goodest. The thing is it has been so ingrained in people's mind that they think of it as a day of love and that on that day they must have an act of love towards them or they feel deprived. Thank you for reading and commenting...:D
JUST LOVELY
Anonymous
20th Feb 2012 2:33am
Wonderful work...as the BEATLES sang...
where are all the lonely people....????
where are all the lonely people....????
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re: JUST LOVELY
20th Feb 2012 10:26am
Re: My lonely Valentine
22nd Jun 2012 3:04pm
It brings back the memories of those elementary school valentines. The one card being left behind, maybe someone will find it, it might make their day. </3
-YTF
-YTF
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re: Re: My lonely Valentine
23rd Jun 2012 1:51am
oh dear. So sad. Thanks for sharing...and for reading and commenting...citydreamytf