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See You Around
See You Around
I see your picture
You have many, but usually they show the same thing one way or another
You look old and worn out; tense really
You're face looks sweet, though
You look loving and careful
But I do not understand your words
And when I do, you are a complete asshole
And yet that attracts me
And deep down when I get past that volcano of hatred getting ready to explode, I reach a new lava and I want to be in your comfort zone
You are so smart
You have many poems that have various meanings
You usually two or three in each competition
Maybe one day I'll confront you in a private message
But if I did, I'd still be vague because I'm to shy to approach you, Your Majesty.
I see your picture
You have many, but usually they show the same thing one way or another
You look old and worn out; tense really
You're face looks sweet, though
You look loving and careful
But I do not understand your words
And when I do, you are a complete asshole
And yet that attracts me
And deep down when I get past that volcano of hatred getting ready to explode, I reach a new lava and I want to be in your comfort zone
You are so smart
You have many poems that have various meanings
You usually two or three in each competition
Maybe one day I'll confront you in a private message
But if I did, I'd still be vague because I'm to shy to approach you, Your Majesty.
Published 19th Feb 2012
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2nd Mar 2012 9:21am
Old , worn out lol omg asshole ha ha ha well you do tell it how it is don't you lmao I regardless think this is so contrasting itself like you hate the fact but you'll go with it anyway , which is what makes it really good :)
2nd Mar 2012 8:07pm
Well Paul, I had been writing this pissed off.
Pissed off because when you and Deathproof were nagging at each other, I thought that you were just being a rude guy because you were right.
So, really that is where this came from.
You're really sweet, though. So, all-in-all it really is contradicting.
Thanks for your comment. :)
Pissed off because when you and Deathproof were nagging at each other, I thought that you were just being a rude guy because you were right.
So, really that is where this came from.
You're really sweet, though. So, all-in-all it really is contradicting.
Thanks for your comment. :)
2nd Mar 2012 8:28pm
oh I see ha I was really angry at him because of his un-neccesary attack so I went on a bit as I don't lie down easy but I'm over that now and I don't hate him he's ok really and thanks for explaining it to me oh fully blown heathen one lol
2nd Mar 2012 8:44pm
except maybe for the sweetness thing.
seen this on the unsaid comp liked it then , like it a lot better now i know it's about that Paul fellah. (never liked that chap) :)
great stuff!
seen this on the unsaid comp liked it then , like it a lot better now i know it's about that Paul fellah. (never liked that chap) :)
great stuff!
2nd Mar 2012 8:56pm
Well thank you Eamon. Your stuff is great as well. :)
I had to find something nice to say, after having him read about how much of an asshole he is.
The best thing about online is that one can never tell if someone is sarcastic it not.
So he is sweet. Or is he?
I had to find something nice to say, after having him read about how much of an asshole he is.
The best thing about online is that one can never tell if someone is sarcastic it not.
So he is sweet. Or is he?
