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encounter
i wondered
if you felt it
felt what you gave
and what i took
like jesus felt that woman
who touched his cloak
if you felt it
felt what you gave
and what i took
like jesus felt that woman
who touched his cloak
Published 12th May 2021
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19th Oct 2021 2:40am
19th Oct 2021 1:03pm
Thank you for commenting.
I posted the "rest" of this poem a couple days later. It's called "prayer." I had really liked these lines and thought they could stand alone, but they worked better as part of the longer piece.
Thanks again.
J.
I posted the "rest" of this poem a couple days later. It's called "prayer." I had really liked these lines and thought they could stand alone, but they worked better as part of the longer piece.
Thanks again.
J.
