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emancipation of truth by sacrifice
The horizon yields such freedom
O' the sun's novel shine
air crisp of ripe anticipation
cleansed of all blatant false virtue
that stagnant suffering
some, from my own delusions
but punctuated perfect
by the clear sound
of your confirming voice
Yes,
that part was played
one way so easily
the other, easier still
To placate?
or to shine only in the moment
I'll never know
forasmuch as knowing, is of trivia
moot within this tsunami of liberty
'Tis all joy in a discovered will of betterment
within my own leap of faith.
Bounds to come undone
and righteous truths spilled
like ceremonial blood
opened from every
harsh ripped wound
bathing a good soul
in release
and of the hold
that once did grasp.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Seeing the forest for the trees and basking in the ambrosia of freedom.
pic: via Pinterest
Seeing the forest for the trees and basking in the ambrosia of freedom.
pic: via Pinterest
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Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 6:51am
Ah freedom
when the soul is free
it shows the heart
what love really means
when the soul is free
it shows the heart
what love really means
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Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 4:02pm
You're a wise one, AP!
(no arguments... lol!)
I am so grateful for your thoughtfulness and the love upon my page. Your feedback is appreciated and I adore it. Thank you for the kind list add. I have been writing via the NoPoo forum (as you know) and I've been hesitant to publish but you unknowingly gave me motivation to do so..... I'm so grateful for that.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 -💙
xo
B
(no arguments... lol!)
I am so grateful for your thoughtfulness and the love upon my page. Your feedback is appreciated and I adore it. Thank you for the kind list add. I have been writing via the NoPoo forum (as you know) and I've been hesitant to publish but you unknowingly gave me motivation to do so..... I'm so grateful for that.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 -💙
xo
B
Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 7:05am
Liberation is the most exhilarating feeling short of escape from doom. You wrote this masterfully. The interweaving of imagery and ideas just took me on a magical mystery tour of grand proportions. The energy here was amazing. Your muse was on fire with creativity. The metaphors flowed majestically. There is magic here which is undeniable. Loved the sweet liberty this celebrated.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 4:05pm
Ohh John! Thanks for the feedback and for taking the opportunity to come and bask with me in a little taste of freedom! Yours are thoughts that confirm to me that I'm on the right track with my attempts at writing. I am utterly grateful for EVERYTHING, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
Much love and respect,
🌹
-S
xoxo
Much love and respect,
🌹
-S
xoxo
Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 1:24pm
Another wonderful write ... "sun's novel shine" ... nugget ... "To placate?/or to shine only in the moment" ... love the play and flow of this ... "righteous truth spilled/like ceremonial blood" ... the closing lines ... with the exaggerate line breaking at the end ... before the powerful close ... great poeting here B ...
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Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
I appreciate your time and the comments, LilD. The summation was AMAZING. I wasn't too sure about this one (it was a #Nopoo write, off the cuff) but published it anyway.... so your thoughts and the generous list add.... well, my palms don't sweat pulling up this poem to read, anymore.. lol... Damn how I still get unnerved.... sigh... lol. I thank you for helping me build my confidence, it's priceless to me.
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 2:58pm
Yes, freedom is a state of mind. Two men look out through prison bars, one sees mud the other sees stars. Today I choose to see.....As usual a great and thought-provoking write. Hugs,, kisses, and peace, Oral O
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Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 4:12pm
I somewhat agree there, Oral. It's a bit my own perception as well as a set of circumstances that one might find themselves in. Obligations, responsibilities, or anything else that might be beyond one's on ability to control.... just an idea / thought... lol. I'm so very appreciative of your comments and get the point you were making, my friend 🙏🏻
And I do choose to see..... glorious poetry and kind words from a dear poet.
All my warmest regards,
🌹
xo
S
And I do choose to see..... glorious poetry and kind words from a dear poet.
All my warmest regards,
🌹
xo
S
Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 4:19pm
I always expect amazing comments, truths, and eye-openers from my poetic Princess and friend. Hugs, kisses, and peace. Oral
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12th May 2021 4:24pm
Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 4:26pm
Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 7:42pm
You got me listening to the song Freedom by George Michaels. You tell truth and it does set you free. You also have deal with consequences of your actions.
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Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
12th May 2021 7:48pm
You got that exactly right. All actions have consequences, indeed, Francisco!!! I'm dancing to GM's Freedom as I type... 🕺🏻 🎶
Ty for sharing your nicely written insights.
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Ty for sharing your nicely written insights.
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Re: Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
I'm in agreement with you, Ru. It's definitely a perception, sure. In that sense of "Are we really free at all? ".. kinda freedom. Yes, set them free... if they come back to you, it's meant to be, right?... or is that just in Romcoms??? I think so.. lol 😂 😂
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to ponder and leave your thoughtful comments.
I love seeing where your mind takes you.
Mine is takes me to the headspace of relief and wide openness.... sigh!
Lovely.
Sending all my good vibes,
🌹 - 💙🖤
xoxo
-ee-b
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to ponder and leave your thoughtful comments.
I love seeing where your mind takes you.
Mine is takes me to the headspace of relief and wide openness.... sigh!
Lovely.
Sending all my good vibes,
🌹 - 💙🖤
xoxo
-ee-b
Re. emancipation of truth by sacrifice
5th Jul 2021 2:28am
“I'll never know
forasmuch as knowing, is of trivia
moot within this tsunami of liberty” this statement felt overwhelmingly true.
Excellent work
forasmuch as knowing, is of trivia
moot within this tsunami of liberty” this statement felt overwhelmingly true.
Excellent work
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