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the crack of...
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 10th May 2021
| Edited 12th May 2021
Author's Note
May's haiku theme: Sunrise via the haiku pond
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/
pic: My own. Downtown Tampa / Channelside
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/
pic: My own. Downtown Tampa / Channelside
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Re. the crack of...
10th May 2021 11:03pm
Re: Re. the crack of...
Ty, dearest FeNyX 🙏🏻
I appreciate the list add and your comments so much! It's always such a pleasure ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love,
🌹-💙
xo
B
I appreciate the list add and your comments so much! It's always such a pleasure ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. the crack of...
10th May 2021 11:14pm
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10th May 2021 11:44pm
Oooo... All smiles in return, LilD.
Ty so much for the generous list add and your kind words 🙏🏻
🌅
xoxo - 💙
Ty so much for the generous list add and your kind words 🙏🏻
🌅
xoxo - 💙
Re: Re. the crack of...
10th May 2021 11:45pm
Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 00:14am
The golden sunset is a beautiful to see with you, LOL. Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.
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Lol.... You're an amazing ego boost, my nice friend. I thank you for that and for your faithful readership. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts, Francisco!
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Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 00:41am
Dear BV,
Stunning. Both poem and photo.
Vistas such as this are a remedy for anything unrested.
and bruise melds to gold is a particularly interesting image to me. Rather like a physical bruise that turns all sorts of colors before it heals and the mind and body feel better again. Lovely write. H🌷
Stunning. Both poem and photo.
Vistas such as this are a remedy for anything unrested.
and bruise melds to gold is a particularly interesting image to me. Rather like a physical bruise that turns all sorts of colors before it heals and the mind and body feel better again. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. the crack of...
I am so glad you enjoyed my haiku, Honoria! :)
This location means a lot to me, here in Tampa and I'm glad I got a nice photo of one of the many many early mornings where I've been lucky enough to witness sunrises this pretty. Yes, the duality of meaning with the wording of bruise to gold was more than just the color of the sunrise, in my head, too.... nicely understood. All healing is from dark to light...
Thanks for the kinship in thought, your extremely kind remarks, the generous list add and all your loveliness that makes me smile, so!
Always my favorite time of day! (reading your comments!)
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xo
B
This location means a lot to me, here in Tampa and I'm glad I got a nice photo of one of the many many early mornings where I've been lucky enough to witness sunrises this pretty. Yes, the duality of meaning with the wording of bruise to gold was more than just the color of the sunrise, in my head, too.... nicely understood. All healing is from dark to light...
Thanks for the kinship in thought, your extremely kind remarks, the generous list add and all your loveliness that makes me smile, so!
Always my favorite time of day! (reading your comments!)
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. the crack of...
I love this Lady Blue🌹 To me the last line is profound on many levels. Thinking of the darkness as violent abuse and dawn's bruising resolving to a bright new day when freed from abuse. Your metaphor is striking and spot on..I like the "punching through" as well. Bravissima goddess poet❤🌹🙏🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 1:49am
Ohh, my dearest BB!!
I've missed you, so..... These comments you've left me remind why!!! Because you're so sweet and your heart is bigger than most, methinks. Your summation of my train of thought was like you were aboard!! 🚉... lol... It's really incredible.
I am so so happy /grateful /appreciative of your visit, the list add and all the supportive insightfulness you provide me. I am so 🍀 lucky.
Don't be a stranger, my dear poet 🐻 🌹 🐻
💙
-🐰
I've missed you, so..... These comments you've left me remind why!!! Because you're so sweet and your heart is bigger than most, methinks. Your summation of my train of thought was like you were aboard!! 🚉... lol... It's really incredible.
I am so so happy /grateful /appreciative of your visit, the list add and all the supportive insightfulness you provide me. I am so 🍀 lucky.
Don't be a stranger, my dear poet 🐻 🌹 🐻
💙
-🐰
Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 1:25am
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11th May 2021 1:44am
Oh wow, Remy... I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. Thank you for that and I'm so grateful for the list add, too. 🙏🏻
I adore haiku and senryś so your thoughts are especially meaningful to me.
My smile is wide and my soul a bit lighter....
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
xo
B
I adore haiku and senryś so your thoughts are especially meaningful to me.
My smile is wide and my soul a bit lighter....
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 1:29am
Love this as I love everything you write gorgeous
I hope when I go in I get a service so I can keep up with your work
Love and light and I'll be back soon
Ron xx
I hope when I go in I get a service so I can keep up with your work
Love and light and I'll be back soon
Ron xx
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Re: Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 1:35am
I'll be here with bells on when you return, if you can't access DUP!! No worries... btw... Positive thinking! ✨ 💫 ✨ and good thoughts only!
You'll do beautifully, Ron. We're all pulling for you, my dear poet! 🦋 🧚🏻♀️. Thank you for your kind words and the generous list add....
You're just lovely.
🌹-💙
xo
B
You'll do beautifully, Ron. We're all pulling for you, my dear poet! 🦋 🧚🏻♀️. Thank you for your kind words and the generous list add....
You're just lovely.
🌹-💙
xo
B
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11th May 2021 5:15am
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Re: Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 5:20am
I sure love these words, Rian...I truly consider them and find myself wishing the same wishes towards my darkened night sky... wishes of hope and promise.... upon the 🍃 winds this evening... ✨ 💫 ✨
Ty so much for visiting and leaving me with your insights. I cherish it, so.
Good days ahead, lovely lady!
🌹-💙
xo
B
Ty so much for visiting and leaving me with your insights. I cherish it, so.
Good days ahead, lovely lady!
🌹-💙
xo
B
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11th May 2021 5:45am
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Re: Re. the crack of...
11th May 2021 5:48am
Thank you for reading and I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts. in glad you enjoyed :)
Welcome to DUP.
I hope you enjoy your time here!
🌹
-B
Welcome to DUP.
I hope you enjoy your time here!
🌹
-B
Re. the crack of...
12th May 2021 00:54am
Beautiful picture and words. Just wondering if the word "Meld" or "Melt." Hugs and peace to the Princess of poets. Oral
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12th May 2021 1:15am
I concur, Oral.
It sounds much better and if your take a gander....
😉
Thank you for the generous comments, I appreciate you and love your visits
🌹
xo
B
It sounds much better and if your take a gander....
😉
Thank you for the generous comments, I appreciate you and love your visits
🌹
xo
B
Re. the crack of...
12th May 2021 1:02am
That is super awesome description. I have read this, a few times, I enjoyed this!
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Re: Re. the crack of...
12th May 2021 1:16am
You're very very kind Lj. I am so grateful for your generous list add and your kind words... I'm all smiles you enjoyed reading this little Haiku. :)
Your visits mean a lot to me and I love seeing you 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Your visits mean a lot to me and I love seeing you 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Re: Re. the crack of...
12th May 2021 2:10am
The pleasure is all mind, my amazing Princess, one of a kind lady, xoxoxo, oral
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Re. the crack of...
12th May 2021 7:01am
A brilliant weaving of words into a scintillating poem. You write short for better than the best. Truly a masterwork that dazzles the senses.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. the crack of...
12th May 2021 3:55pm
Thanks, John... Your comments are so uplifting and a great pleasure. I appreciate you, the generous list add and all your loveliness. You made smiles out of a hectic day.
kudos!
🌹
Ty Ty!
-S
xoxo
kudos!
🌹
Ty Ty!
-S
xoxo
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
12th May 2021 3:49pm
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Re: Re. the crack of...
12th May 2021 3:52pm
I do... haiku and senryś are some of my favorite writes. I usually do few a month.
Ty for reading and for your comments.
🌹
xo
Ty for reading and for your comments.
🌹
xo
Re. the crack of...
4th Jul 2021 8:45am
It's one of my favorite sceneries on those pre-dawn runs. Watching the sky change colors is not only inspiring but it's intriguing.
Wonderful, stunning piece Blue.
Wonderful, stunning piece Blue.
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Re. the crack of...
2nd Dec 2022 9:20pm
I think you may have come back to the light.
Interesting use of bruise, which fits in this poem.
Interesting use of bruise, which fits in this poem.
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