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six-foot two
cute with her septum pierced
that woman looks fierce
black tight dress
that impresses
amazonian with a melting smile
checking her dance a while
figuring out when do I strike
a mountain I'd like to hike
maybe visit the cave below
I watch her go
all I could think
buy her a drink
confident at five-foot ten
I'm a cock and she's a hen
that woman looks fierce
black tight dress
that impresses
amazonian with a melting smile
checking her dance a while
figuring out when do I strike
a mountain I'd like to hike
maybe visit the cave below
I watch her go
all I could think
buy her a drink
confident at five-foot ten
I'm a cock and she's a hen
Published 9th May 2021
Author's Note
It was a good night tonight.
05.09.2021
05.09.2021
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9th May 2021 8:56am
I enjoyed this poem, it felt fun. I love the last two lines, gold right there.
10th May 2021 5:07am
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10th May 2021 5:15am
9th May 2021 1:37pm
10th May 2021 5:16am
9th May 2021 4:25pm
'maybe visit the cave below'.... outstanding line, Remy. 🔥
Loved the entire piece from the title to the last line.... definitely a Remy best, IMO.
Terrifically penned ink, dear poet.
🌹
Ty for sharing
-B
Loved the entire piece from the title to the last line.... definitely a Remy best, IMO.
Terrifically penned ink, dear poet.
🌹
Ty for sharing
-B
10th May 2021 5:21am
9th May 2021 6:13pm
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- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
13th May 2021 6:29am
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15th May 2021 4:50pm
22nd May 2021 6:18am
3rd Jun 2021 6:24am
22nd Jun 2021 5:40am
That would be eye to eye with us. We love the flow to the piece and the layout, tight work dude
22nd Jun 2021 8:49pm
