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misread
spanish
black curls, tanned skin.
"hazel-eyed pretty boy"
troubled youth, better man now, still
halfling
tinted, hard to blend with them
white side doesn't accept
some, not fully
misjudged
black curls, tanned skin.
"hazel-eyed pretty boy"
troubled youth, better man now, still
halfling
tinted, hard to blend with them
white side doesn't accept
some, not fully
misjudged
Published 30th Apr 2021
Author's Note
42 syllables Competition
04.29.2021
04.29.2021
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Apr 2021 5:09am
30th Apr 2021 5:08am
Introspection at it's purest.
Raw and truthful
Its not easy to write with such openness and you did a great job, Remy.
Good luck in the comp
🌹
-B
Raw and truthful
Its not easy to write with such openness and you did a great job, Remy.
Good luck in the comp
🌹
-B
30th Apr 2021 5:11am
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Anonymous
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5th May 2021 6:31pm
I have no idea the path or journey you have walked. I hope we can one day get to know the man behind the black curls, tanned skin and hazel eyes. Beautiful poem.
2nd Oct 2021 5:13am
